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[Report This]Date: 01/24/2016 10:54:17 AM Title: Step One: Retrieving the Bait
Ohhhhhhh, this is ominous to say the least! Going from an innocent day at the mall to that! Harsh! Who has captured them and why? Cant' wait to find out! Great beginning!
P.S. Glad to see you back and writing!
[Report This]Date: 06/04/2015 12:26:47 AM Title: Step One: Retrieving the Bait
Crawling on all fours over to her friend, Marie made it over to her friends side. “Jean, Jean come on I need you to wake up.”
I like that line the most! I can see it and its sad and awesome.
Author's Response: I want to show how good of friends they are. It's important to this fic.
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2015 10:48:51 AM Title: Step One: Retrieving the Bait
Yikes, these two certainly aren't in for a good time, although I'm really looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it!! Working on more now!
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2015 4:41:42 AM Title: Step One: Retrieving the Bait
Going great so far - although not for poor rogue and Jean :( would love to see more, very intrigued!
Author's Response: No good things for the girls, no. Glad you like it!!
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2015 2:14:35 AM Title: Step One: Retrieving the Bait
Great start, hope there will be more!
Author's Response: Totes there will be more!