Reviews For Wyoming Territory
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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2016 10:45:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm usually not in to westerns but this seems more of as period romance than a straight up western, of course i could be wrong, since I have little knowledge of westerns.

Like a good period drama the story starts with a tragedy, it is a great way to emphasis the isolation Marie feels bot emotionally now that she lots her parents and geographically.

While her circumstance seems dire I like that Marie is strong willed and willing to continue to live on, and enjoy what she has.

I like that Logan's arrival both brought a sense of danger as well as relief to Marie, and how proper she is been despite that they are probably the only two people for days.

And her nursing him to health is just wonderful, I believe there is a term for Nurse and patient falling in love with each other, can't think of it right now but I doesn't feel rushed. It felt like they through share experiences came to appreciate each others company.

Best scene for me is when Logan is stranded out in the snow and the thing he is worried about is that if he doesn't make it back, Marie will think he abandoned her.

Short but sweet story, I feel another paragraph or two on solving Logan's problems or better yet an epilogue of sorts where Marie's Ranch is now filled with warmth children and laughter would have rounded out the story nicely.

Author's Response: Sure, sure call me out on my period romance tagging. Just kidding it is a romance set in the west. :)

I'm sure a life alone on the frontier could be done, but it would be hard and take a certain mentality.

Logan couldn't have arrived any other way. *runs off to search* Huh, Florence Nightingale effect, interesting. And after all Marie had done for him, he wouldn't abandon her.

I have entertained adding to this, but with all my other works in progress I'm afraid putting it on the list means it is a long way off. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2016 4:41:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was truly wonderful! Our favorite couple in a different setting, yet still very Rogan. It's nice as a one-shot, but it would be nice if we saw more. What was the "unfinished business" in South Pass? How was it resolved? Did they get married? Inquiring minds want to know!

Author's Response: Thank you. I had originally hoped there would be more, but alas too many other irons in the fire. I always imagined that Logan in this story was a outlaw of sorts and the trouble was from a gunfighter that thought he was tougher. The rest is up to your imagination. ;)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2014 5:44:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good AU for those two - love it ^-^

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2014 6:42:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was WONDERFUL...our same Logan and Marie, but not. Loved the western backdrop and the artwork was AMAZING!!  Well done, cs, well done!



Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you. I couldn't pass on the idea of them in a Western.

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2014 7:37:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, very creative! I'm not really one for westerns, but I am one for Logan and Marie, lol. Gorgeous artwork too!

Author's Response: Thank you, Logan and Marie go with everything. We'll just blame this on Louis L'amour.

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2014 5:10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Brilliant, so enjoyable! The ending made me so giddy - you rock!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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