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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2021 8:31:27 AM Title: Chapter 9

Awwwwwww, that was lovely! I've never seen a chapter go from bloody to sweet so quickly before! And the interaction between Marie and Wolverine was unexpected but believable.

However, in all the "not smart" things Scott listed, he neglected to mention the biggest one of all, not inserting an I.V. into Wolverine to KEEP him sedated!

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Date: 06/08/2021 8:54:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

Rocky road ice cream with caramel syrup, whipped cream, sprinkles and zesty dill pickles? 😳😳😳😳😳

Well, dispite that stomach churning moment, I really liked the chapter!

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Date: 06/08/2021 8:44:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

That was beautiful! Just beautiful! But I'm still scared. What if they come back? That Stryker b*stard knows where they live. I hope he goes after him and everyone one else in that Weapon X program! It would be even better if he got Victor involved, too! Make it a little brotherly bonding experience!

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Date: 06/08/2021 8:36:21 AM Title: Chapter 6

Yes! Yes! Yes! They got her back! She's healthy! Now I won't have to hunt down the author! All is well with the universe!

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Date: 06/08/2021 8:27:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

Damnit! Damnit! Damnit! Why?! Why?! Why?! Why does this have to happen?!?! It's. Not. Fair!

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Date: 06/08/2021 8:18:38 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well, I don't even know where to start! got the reactions totally wrong. I thought Scott would go all outraged big brother/father and it was JEAN that throws a hissy fit. I'm not surprised, though; she always acts like every man on the planet wants her, even the gay ones! It's one of the MANY reasons I can't stand her.

And they're going to have a baby! Logan does NOT waste time! I guess that's what you get for getting involved with a Feral! And Logan knows who he is! I hope the author does a flashback of that.

Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2021 7:56:53 AM Title: Chapter 3

Now that is what I call smut! And, I love it! Cannot wait to see the reaction to the news that they're married! I bet Scott winds up having to go to the medbay!

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Date: 06/08/2021 7:47:26 AM Title: Chapter 2

OK, I knew the the X-Men could be oblivious, but this is just sad! Scott actually said, OUT LOUD "If he had feelings for Rogue surely we would have seen it before now." Uh, excuse me? He. Gave. Her. His. Debit. Card! If THAT doesn't say "I'm head over heels in love", I don't know what does!

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Date: 06/08/2021 7:33:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

They do present the very image of domestic bliss, don't they? I can't wait for the X-Men to find out the truth! Great start! I look forward to reading the rest!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2013 10:31:26 PM Title: Chapter 13

Intense chapter. Logan's got a big decision. I'm looking forward to see what he decides. Hope you update soon.

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Date: 09/02/2013 10:15:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

A great chapter. I do like your victor. I like how he has become part of the family. :)

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Date: 09/02/2013 10:02:42 PM Title: Chapter 11

Another awesome chapter.

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Date: 09/02/2013 9:54:51 PM Title: Chapter 10

Sweet!

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Date: 09/02/2013 9:50:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

A feral wolverine needing his woman. Loved it. I liked Marie singing to him to sooth him too.

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Date: 09/02/2013 9:43:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

So cute. :)

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Date: 09/02/2013 9:35:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

Sweet and touching chapter. Loved it.

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Date: 09/02/2013 9:30:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

Super chapter. Keep up the great work.

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Date: 09/02/2013 9:24:13 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Wolvie. :(

But you go Scott. I'm glad to see he has logan's back.

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Date: 09/02/2013 9:16:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

Nice chapter. The only thing that threw me off was that I though no one but Logan new that rogue had control of her skin. But then storm runs over to grab rogue's bare hand to see her wedding ring and no one seems surprised by nothing happening with rogue's mutation.

Other than that I enjoyed the chapter and am looking forward to hitting the next button. :)

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2013 9:02:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

As much as Logan loves dressing Marie up in Victoria Secrets, it would be amusing if Logan suggested naming rogue and his little girl Victoria in honor of one of his favorite stores. Lol Keep up the great work. Your stories make me smile.

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Date: 09/02/2013 8:46:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

Sneaky Remy. It's about time Scott learner to keep his mouth shut about somethings.

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Date: 09/02/2013 8:34:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awe so cute. Loved the quiet I love you spoken at the end.

Reviewer: crash22244 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2013 12:59:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2013 3:59:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

beautiful story, i really like it! thanks for sharing!

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