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Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2013 3:00:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

No changes necessary. Heart-breaking as it is, it's just perfect.

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2013 4:56:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great little fic, like the whole conversation with rogue/jean :) very enjoyable! Xxx

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2013 1:18:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sometimes it's hard for those of us who've seen Jean as the villain for so long to see any good in her at all, but you have done a wonderful job of making 'good Jean' believable. I also like that Wolverine is campaigning for Logan to finally get his head out his ass and see Rogue for who she is. It might be interesting to hear the mental conversation between Logan's alter ego and the man himself on that subject. Wonder if that jukebox has a song to fit that situation? Hmmm...

I did notice one particular wording goof that you might want to take a look at:

"And I'm thinking a lot of time because even Scott can tell you're not a kid anymore." I think you meant "...NOT a lot of time..." , right?

All in all, this was a fresh, new take on the Logan-Jean-Rogue triangle and I liked it. And I love the idea of the 'Jukebox' series. Are you wanting to write the stories yourself, or can others contribute? Either way, good luck with it! -- Wendie

Author's Response: i was originally thinking that I would write it, but thinking about having others contribute sounds kind of fun... are you volunteering? :-)

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