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Date: 06/28/2012 9:54:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
Me like...me like...more please!
Date: 06/27/2012 9:44:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Alright. I'm liking this more now. I like the premise thatMarie got pregnant intentionally and ran away. I like even more that you brought it up last chapter and hinted at it a bit in this one, but you didn't feel the need to linger and drag on about it in this one. I liked the back and forth between Marie and Victor. This is nice. And by nice I mean weird and unorthodox. But that's why I like it. Thank you.
~Mia
Date: 06/25/2012 9:51:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
I just found this story and I love it! I cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 06/25/2012 2:43:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
Not 100% sure what I like about it. Your writing is good, the plot is moving along. But is English your first language?
~Mia
P.S. I didn't mean that to sound so snotty. I do like your story. Can't pinpoint why yet. I'll be looking for its updates.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. You are right, English is not my first language - I try my hardest, but when I have no time to read English fanfics and I'm only surrounded by German words, my English gets a little rusty and the words and phrase I 'would' know aren't 'flowing' like they should.rnI'll update later with the next chapter. I would be happy to hear from you again.
Date: 06/22/2012 7:35:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Iiiinteresting. Very curious to know the reason.
Date: 06/22/2012 7:32:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very cool. Never pictured this sort of scenario before. Victor walking into a diner and acting normal. Very interesting. :)
Date: 06/13/2012 4:40:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it...caught my attention and has me DYING to see what comes next! I can't wait for the next part :)
Date: 06/12/2012 9:54:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
hopefully victor will step up for marie and his niece or nephew. if logan doesn't care enough about marie to keep in contact, at least she could have victor to help her out. exciting update!
Date: 06/12/2012 9:37:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing. I particularly like how Marie's checking around to see what she can skewer Victor with. This is a Victor I'm going to have to get used to--- unaccustomed to his being all responsible. :) Looking forward to the next installment!
[Report This]Date: 06/10/2012 7:31:57 AM Title: Prologue
yes, I do like it. Your characterization of Rogue as a strong, mature woman instead of a scared kid is much more in keeping with comic canon.