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Reviewer: dollface Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2017 9:47:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

OMG!Victor being a single dad is simply too cute!I want Logan to come so they can be 'pack'.I always liked Victor as a personality,plus he is super hot ,but them sleeping together is making things very complex....

Reviewer: Candy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2016 5:03:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

¿La pareja aquí es rogan?

Reviewer: Candy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2016 4:36:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Mi gusta Logan y Victor peleando por Marie.

Reviewer: Candy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2016 11:11:08 PM Title: Chapter 8

¿…s rogan?

Reviewer: Reasiez Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2014 9:50:40 AM Title: Chapter 8

This story is so cute! I can't wait for more! Nice Job!

Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2014 11:00:10 PM Title: Prologue

I really like this story! I love that have presented a much more sympathetic Sabertooth that is believable. Except for AoA, he's almost always shown as a animistic, unrepentant bad guy. I would love to see if she winds up with Vic. Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: LiLlAdYeX Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2013 9:38:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

I really like this story. I am a die hard W/R shipper but I do love a W/R/V triangle if the Victor is characterized as the Origins Sabertooth. I hope you continue on with this story even if it turns out to be Marie and Victor at the end. I think it's great so far.

Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2013 12:08:05 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh no. No more chapters after this? I just getting into this story. I'm a glutton for punishment, reading stories not updated in a while. But I'm hoping when I review then the authors would be nice enough to post more :-)

Please come back to this soon. I'm really loving Marie and Victor together

Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2013 11:55:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

I think Marie had every right to be with Victor. She wasn't lying when she said that Logan would be sleeping with a new woman every night himself. He hadn't said they were committed to each other. And right now, Victor even has me all tied up in knots. The fact that you can make me sway from my Rogan obsession says a lot about your writing! Great job!

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2012 8:22:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

I am kinda of confused by this fic. One minute Victor is all "brotherly" looking out for Jimmy's cub. Next he's having sex with Rogue. I don't get it. I started reading the fic thinking Roctor friendship, which I truly enjoyed. I would have liked to see that developed. Adding sex and meeting his kid turns this into something different. I think I have mixed feelings on this one. Keeping an open mind but I am wondering if this is Roctor or Rogan fic?

Reviewer: speciallaura Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2012 12:20:42 PM Title: Chapter 8

Truly loving this story can't wait for an update. Great job

Reviewer: KatyeJanae Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2012 7:59:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love the brother stuff. Victor calling Logan Jimmy in his thoughts, finding Logan every year to beat him up on his birthday (as a mom I can tell you that my kids may not fight with the intention of bodily harm but there are occasions) & mast of all watching out for Marie because shes carrying "Jimmy's" cub. Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter. Logan needs to get his ass kicked for treating Marie like a one-night stand.

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2012 5:54:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

Lol, I seriously did not see that coming. For a second, I thought Vincent's dad might be Logan!
And, yes, the muffin riddle is solved! I got such satisfaction out of discovering that. Adorable. :)

Reviewer: springbok7 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2012 8:13:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for another great update! Looking forward to Victor getting a good scolding from Marie and getting forced to buy her replacement underwear LOLOL!

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2012 6:14:50 PM Title: Chapter 8

Liked it very much! You're right, I can't believe I didn't make the connection. Now I wanna see what Logan thinks of this whole situation....

Reviewer: Sea Air Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2012 9:16:18 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm into it, pity the site isn't working properly!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2012 4:57:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

I liked the interaction with the kids.

~Mia

Reviewer: springbok7 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2012 3:32:34 PM Title: Prologue

I like it, I like it! I love the interplay between Rogue and Victor. This is definitely a take on him that you don't usually see and I'm loving every bit of it. He's still an arrogant, full-of-himself asshole but you're showing him as a multidimensional person, and ALL people have crappy parts and not-so-crappy parts to them. Most portrayals of him are extremely one-dimensional so it's really nice to see this side.

I also love that Rogue is her own person. So many fics paint her as a person very dependent on the emotional support of another, usually Logan. Your Rogue knows what she wants, has taken steps to obtain it, and ain't about to take shit from anyone, not even Victor, about it. Not that there's anything wrong with an emotionally needy Rogue but it's lovely to see a different take on her from time to time, and yours fits that to a tee :D

No pressure but... can't wait for next update! LOL!

(And don't worry about the language thing, your writing works and it's perfectly understandable, so it's all good!)

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2012 1:24:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

Please don't think I have lost interest, just been busy, but this is one of my fave WIP's

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2012 7:26:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

Very nice. Sexy without being overtly trashy. Even for a one night stand. Bit disappointed that Creed got more screen time for his sex scene than Jimmy.

~Mia

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2012 1:24:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

love it! victor is at least keeping an eye on marie, logan's off in his own world and the 1 night stand doesn't seem to really mean anything to him. good for rogue for saying if logan can do it, so can i. who knows, maybe vic is the better guy for her anyway. again, great job!

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2012 5:05:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

Iiiinteresting, interesting. I'm curious to see what will happen next. :)

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2012 4:57:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

Eep, Victor's so creepy. But it's very interesting, all the same.

Reviewer: SpeedGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2012 1:11:19 AM Title: Chapter 4

I like the banter between Victor and Rogue. Great Chapter.

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2012 6:01:36 PM Title: Chapter 4

aw! i love the marie-victor interactions! i swear, if logan doesn't sort his shit out soon she'd be better off with victor! i mean, has logan even called the mansion to check in on her? does he know she's MIA? sheesh.

you could start a whole new trend of victor/marie stories! we could call the pairing vicrie. rogtooth? or roctor. ooo! saberogue! lol ;-}

such good writing, you really set the scene and showed vic's perspective of logan's behavior. i really felt for the guy (see above). i can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response: Many thanks for this review! Apparently the pairing is already called roctor over at ff net.
until now Marie left the mansion about one week ago and Logan left the mansion only 9 weeks ago - in my opinion it's too soon for him to call, after all he didn't seem to have called the mansion between X1 and X2 and I guess that at least one year would be between the plots of the two movies. And he seems to be the type of guy, who forgets time: a) on his important search for himself, b) his daily life is pretty much the same EVERY day (driving, drinking, fighting, fucking) and you soon forget how much time has past by or that it's already the next month, c) he's a loner at heart and has all eternity due to his healing factor - a year is nothing for him and he might 'forget' that other people around him don't have this luxurity.

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