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Reviewer: rosestardiskey Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2012 10:45:33 AM Title: Prologue

Oh! Super dark Rogue. I like!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2011 8:45:50 PM Title: Prologue

This story is good so far! Intrigued about what happened to turn fiery rebellious Rogue into repentant Rogue. You might want to just double-check that you stay in first person, though. Most of it is "I..." and then right at the end of chapter one you switch to "Marie..." and "she..." etc. Looking forward to reading more! :-D

Author's Response: Thank you very much for pointing that out. As to your curiosity, I'll be sure to satisfy that in the following chapters.

Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2011 7:20:52 PM Title: Prologue

I greatly enjoyed your prologue and first chapter! The idea of Marie feeling guilty for not using her power to stop the Phoenix makes for an interesting plot point. I can't wait to see how she deals with that guilt, and whether she comes to see that it's irrational/misplaced, or whether she has a legitimate reason for feeling like it's her fault.

I mean, did she deliberately think "I could drain Jean and stop her, but I don't want to" or was it something she realized after the fact and felt guilty about?

Also, I wonder if anyone else (hint, Logan!) holds any resentment towards her regarding Jean's death and the way things played out. It wouldn't seem so from Ororo's comments, but who knows. I look forward to seeing how he and Rogue interact when the really 'reunite' for the first time.

You definitely laid out the situation and left plenty of questions to be answered. I think this is a very promising start, especially for your first fanfic. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hahaha! Thanks, can't really tell you how much that means to me. And I promise those questions will be answered in the following chapters. I'll be trying to upload as much as I can. I even got two more chapters typed out just gotta go over them for any mistakes.

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