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Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 6:27:32 PM Title: The Wolverine

Lovely surprise to find this update. Keep it up

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Sorry to keep everyone waiting on this latest update :). Finals, y'know. Ugh.

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 5:24:43 PM Title: The Blood

Oh, thank god.
The sheer vengeance Logan reigned down on that bastard was magnificent! I get so blood-thirsty when one of them is harmed, lol.
This chapter was totally loaded with emotion. Incredible.

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 5:20:36 PM Title: The Souvenir

I LOVED this chapter. :D

This part:
>>>It wasn’t like he was dragging her off to a cave to have his way with her. He just needed her to himself for a while, so he could prove himself to her and show her what a good mate he would make. He wasn’t sure if that was normal, if other men did those kinds of things when they found the woman they wanted.

Author's Response: Lol, I love instinctual, unsure-of-himself Logan too. I always see him as having these really neanderthal instincts, yet he understands that they aren't quite normal for the society he lives in, so he goes through all these mental escapades trying to justify his behavior to himself. It's pretty amusing.

Reviewer: Tamana Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 4:47:56 PM Title: The Phone

Thats a f#^%!Ąg good chapter

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 3:36:23 PM Title: The Wolverine

ok. Thats awesome!!! Wolverine killing Jose in Marie's head too! Great update!! I can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :). It just seemed like poetic justice to me. And plays nicely into the remainder of the plot!

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 3:13:29 PM Title: The Wolverine

Egad. Well, that's a fairly comprehensive comeuppance, yes. It's very satisfying. ;)

(And I'm sorry about being so logical. I'll try to post some useless feedback sometime. OMG LOGAN IS SO HAWT!!!!1!)

Author's Response: I felt the comeuppance was pretty all-encompassing as well. I mean, eternal hell in the mind of the girl you murdered, at the mercy of the man who loves her? Pretty much covers all the bases. And thanks, on the useless feedback. Just try. That's all I'm asking.

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 1:50:16 PM Title: The Wolverine

WOW!!! AWESOME!!!! I LOVE that! Perfect!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I loved it too. Jose totally deserved it.

Reviewer: Novagrey21 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 11:19:50 AM Title: The Wolverine

Oh that was fantastic,his enternal hell is in the mind of the woman he tried to murder with her lover as the judge, jury, and executioner--Wow that sounds painful even to me.

Author's Response: Nicely put! Yep, it's a pretty brutal comeuppance, really. But if anyone deserves that, it's scum like Jose. Yick.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 9:17:18 AM Title: The Wolverine

more please

Author's Response: Ha! Thank you sooo much for all the reviews, bima. It was really fun to sort of follow you along as you read the story and see your response to every chapter. Very amusing. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 9:16:48 AM Title: The Blood

Never ever piss of the Wolverine and hurt his mate *evil grin*

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Date: 11/30/2011 9:12:41 AM Title: The Phone

Hurry!!!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 9:12:02 AM Title: The Souvenir

Why don't you find her right now to tell her...

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 9:11:11 AM Title: The Blade

Logan, LOGAN, *screaming really loud* LOGAN!!!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 9:09:23 AM Title: The Prayer

Aaaahhhhh!!!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 9:08:22 AM Title: The Touch

Ewww

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Date: 11/30/2011 9:05:32 AM Title: The Bird

YESSSSSS!!!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 9:04:01 AM Title: The Snake

Where is an angry Wolverine when you need one?

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 9:01:53 AM Title: The Trick

I’ll drain him,

Good idea... but the thoughts she'll get maybe not so good.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 8:57:38 AM Title: The Talk

Come on lets talk about it.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 8:42:49 AM Title: The Breakfast

Awwww...

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 8:41:39 AM Title: The Wolverine

Even in her mind, Logan is going to kick some ass. Love it.

Author's Response: Yep. That's gotta be Wolverine's dream come true. I almost feel bad for Jose--almost.

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 8:07:28 AM Title: The Wolverine

What a welcome surprise to see another chapter! Good ol wolverine!

Author's Response: I know, don'cha just love'im?

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 12:59:10 AM Title: The Blood

wow. now that was a great reaction! I LOVE how logan tore Jose apart! I really really wanted him too! Can't wait for more!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh yeah. I think it would have been just wrong to write this story without letting Logan tear the guy to shreds. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wudelfin Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2011 11:23:11 PM Title: The Blood

that was such a woah moment...

Author's Response: I'm glad the scene worked for you :). Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2011 11:13:52 PM Title: The Blood

Oh MAN! What a way for them to discover each other's powers. Awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked. They can definitely stop worrying about the whole mutant issue now :P

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