Reviews For The Private Dance
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Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2011 2:49:17 PM Title: The Names

Aww just read all of these chapters and really like this story :-D sweetness xXx

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2011 2:47:41 PM Title: The Names

Aww just read all of these chapters and really like this story :-D sweetness xXx

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Here and at FFnet ;)

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 11:13:53 PM Title: The Names

I LOVE this story. Love it! You always come up with such interesting scenarios, and you play the characters so well. Really, really great stuff. I just read this entire story right now and wanting more! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you like the scenario and how the characters. It's weird; this one practically wrote itself in one sitting. I've gone back and tweaked things and added a lot of detail, but Logan and Marie did most of the work, haha

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 10:59:56 PM Title: The Proposition

Oh, Logan. I'd give in, lol:

He caught her arm, hating the way that made her flinch, the spike of fear in her scent. He let her go. “That’s not what I want,” he ground out. “Not in front of those other men. I want a private dance, just for me.” His eyes made their way down her body, desire flaring at the thought of— “I want you to dance just for me,” he repeated.

Author's Response: Lol me too!

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 9:15:48 PM Title: The Convention

Love this story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review :)

Reviewer: immiD Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 8:32:17 PM Title: The Names

Love it! Cant wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're liking it so far, and thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 12:09:14 AM Title: The Names

I LOVE IT! The short chapters are really exactly how much information that the reader needs to make the story. The rhythm of the entire thing is perfect. I adore the line about Scott and Jean being spoiled children, it is soo who they are sometimes. I started reading this and you were at chapter 15 so finding chapter 16 at the end was like a present! Now I will spend the next couple of days stalking the site for chapter 17.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're liking it. The pacing felt right to me too, so I'm glad the short chapters aren't too jarring. Lol at the site stalking. I have to confess I do that too sometimes :P

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2011 9:37:36 PM Title: The Convention

Yay!!!! Not only is a new story so exciting, but so many chapters. Now hurry, hurry! Keep posting!

Author's Response: Hehe, well, they're pretty short chapters. Not sure why that always happens--my chapters are either a few hundred words, or 4000+. Weird.

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2011 8:23:28 PM Title: The Confession

More! It's awesome. The premise, the interactions, everything is pitch perfect. And I have to love a bitchy Jean portrayal. ;) Can't wait for the next chapters!

Author's Response: Ha! I know. I actually like Jean, and have never written her bitchy before, but after seeing everyone else's portrayals of her, it was just too fun to pass up. Thanks for reading =)

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2011 7:08:55 PM Title: The Convention

This story is sooo deliciously cute! I hope you can update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much :). I'm going to post at least the next few chapters tonight. Silly work keeps intervening!

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