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Date: 11/22/2011 12:26:11 AM Title: The Secret
Oh, poor Marie. Afraid she can't control it in her sleep and not wanting to hurt Logan. Both so scared the other will be anti-mutant. ::sniffle:: Thanks for the quick update! I really love this story and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yeah, this Marie's had it pretty rough, and it's about to get even worse, actually. But there's a happy ending, I promise! Gah, first I let the poor girl get eaten alive by wolves and now this. I seriously need to write a fic where she gets a mani-pedi and eats a box of chocolates or something. Sorry Marie, LOL!
Date: 11/21/2011 10:06:40 PM Title: The Bright Spot
I will provide you something more indeapth later but I just wanted to let you know I am loving this. It is beautiful and finding the updates yesterday really really made my day.
Author's Response: Aww thanks :). I'm pretty sure that's how every reader on this site feels when they see an update to 'Everything'.
[Report This]Date: 11/21/2011 9:30:31 PM Title: The Bright Spot
Aw, poor Marie. Can't wait to see how these two move forward.
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Marie. Things are about to get a little worse too =/. But moving forward, there will be a happy ending!
[Report This]Date: 11/21/2011 9:30:13 PM Title: The Bright Spot
I'd love to leave a review, but I'm too busy frantically refreshing, hoping to see the next chapter up... ;-)
Aw, Marie's thoughts are so sweet. And very clever idea, having Marie have absorbed a stripper's memories. I was kind of wondering how she was so "expert" with the dancing and...other things. ;-)
Author's Response: LOL I'm so sorry I left ya hanging! Things have been crazy busy erghh. Thank God for the holiday weekend. Hopefully I can get the rest of this story churned out and run the next chapter of Feral by you! Yeah, you didn't think I'd have a reason for suddenly turning Marie into a confident sex goddess? Silly, silly ;)
Date: 11/21/2011 7:12:36 PM Title: The Secret
I'm really enjoying this story. Good pacing and great flow. Makes me anxious for the next update
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: 11/21/2011 6:58:16 PM Title: The Secret
Aww love hugs xXx
Author's Response: :D Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11/21/2011 12:18:34 PM Title: The Secret
This is the greatest story I've read in a long time...thank you so much for the great updates!
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much for your review. That really means a lot. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much!
Date: 11/21/2011 9:51:30 AM Title: The Compliment
This was a really good touch too:
“You’ve got the most beautiful skin, baby. Like porcelain. I love it.”
Marie looked away, her arms still folded over her stomach. “Thanks. Thanks for sayin’ that.“ Her voice grew a little thick. “That’s really nice.”
I had pretty much forgotten about Marie's mutation. I am dying to see what happens when they both "come clean" about their mutations.
Author's Response: Well, circumstances are going to lead them to discover each other's mutations in a pretty unusual way. And I'm glad you liked Logan's compliment. It just seemed like a perfect moment to me too, with him not realizing just how much that would mean to her :)
Date: 11/21/2011 1:25:45 AM Title: The Compliment
OMG. I totally love this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Yay. Thanks so much for the reviews! I'm really glad you're liking the story so far :)
Date: 11/21/2011 1:09:07 AM Title: The Green
Okay, this is great. I really love the way you portray Logan here. He wants so badly to be the good guy for her, but he just wants her so badly that he can't help himself.
Date: 11/21/2011 12:56:31 AM Title: The Names
Wow, this story is so touching.
[Report This]Date: 11/20/2011 9:23:41 PM Title: The Compliment
Awwww...I literally went "squee!" when I saw you had updated this. This story has hooked me in like crazy...I think your little chapters have some crack-like addictive properties. I really liked Marie taking control -- and Logan's restraint was very hot. It was all the more sad to see her go back to her whipped-puppy persona. I hope Logan can help her get past that. I really want to know what the morning brings, and how she reacts to his "secrets." So...get writing! Pretty please?
Author's Response: LOL crackfic huh? I like it! Yes, there is a reason for that abrupt shift back to the whipped-puppy persona. Logan is definitely going to work on helping her get past that. And he's not the only one with "secrets" :)
[Report This]Date: 11/20/2011 8:37:44 PM Title: The Compliment
Hot, totally hot and sweet and tender and all that. I can't wait to see what Marie thinks!
Author's Response: Aw thanks for the review! I'm glad you're liking the story
[Report This]Date: 11/16/2011 9:55:18 PM Title: The Change of Rules
You are doing such a great job with this story...I like seeing Marie get a little bit of spark back, and it's cute how she can only do it because she thinks Logan is drunk. I like how she's taking charge, and poor Logan's fraying restraint is very sexy.
I really like how you're handling Logan's shame regarding his animal side. It's not overdone at all, just a natural assumption on his part that if she knows it'll change how she feels about him. And the little comments that hint at his damage, like this:
" Shit this good doesn’t happen to me."
I love me some damaged Logan. ;-) Now get writing, darlin'!
[Report This]Date: 11/14/2011 2:03:40 AM Title: The Change of Rules
*fans self*
That is so very, very hot.
Author's Response: Whew! That's a relief. I was kind of worried. It's freakin' hard to write smut from a male perspective! I seriously had to do some research and get some real-guy input for this one. Glad it turned out alright =D
Date: 11/13/2011 3:38:57 PM Title: The Change of Rules
i've been reading this as it was being posted and i have to say i love it. i wasn't sure whether i'd enjoy the set-up but i was pleasantly surprised (as a waitress for five years however i can tell you that young rogue is gonna have to toughen up with both her customers and her boss). that said, i'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this, and i really like this version of logan and marie. hobbits away, hey!
Author's Response: Pleasantly surprised? That's great! I was kind of worried, because I'm neither a waitress nor a stripper, but I tried to make the characterization as realistic as possible. Still, I was worried anyone who has worked in one of those two professions might read this and be like 'WTF stupid writer has no clue what she's talking about' haha. Thanks for the feedback, and let me know if I screw anything up ;P
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2011 10:08:26 AM Title: The Change of Rules
Totally hot and totally awesome.
"Green was his new favorite color."
Oh, I just bet it will be.
Author's Response: Heh. So glad you enjoyed. Thanks for always being an awesome reviewer, Katya!
Date: 11/13/2011 9:56:35 AM Title: The Change of Rules
I continue to marvel at your ability to use language. You can put in 600 words what would take me 6000. The way you are slowly building the connection between them is compelling. I want them to just go at it but you have me also wanting them to stop and sleep tonight and let the pull they fell towards each other deepen. Marvelous, just simply marvelous.
Author's Response: Thank you! But I think the short word count is because I kind of suck at describing things and generally fail to include vivid imagery of any kind LOL. And I hate to spoil the fun, but there will be more 'sleeping' than 'going at it' tonight. I see this more as a turning point for Marie, taking control of herself and her body, than any kind of real step in their relationship, y'know? But maybe I should shut up because that's going to become apparent in the next chapter or two =D
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2011 1:52:31 AM Title: The Angel
Ahh love xXx
Author's Response: :) so glad you're liking the story
Date: 11/12/2011 7:01:50 PM Title: The Angel
ohh what an interesting story. I am very much enjoying it so far. More please!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the story! More soon, promise.
[Report This]Date: 11/12/2011 12:56:25 PM Title: The Angel
Oh that made me cry!
Author's Response: Aw :(. I'm sorry it made you cry, heh! I wanted the story to be realistic, but ultimately hopeful. There's gonna be a pretty happy ending, promise.
[Report This]Date: 11/12/2011 12:45:08 PM Title: The Angel
This is such a great balance of what makes Logan someone we love and think is such a jerk at the same time. You write both of them so well.
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad the characterization of Logan is working for you! Writing from a male perspective is a challenge for me, and I'm never quite sure if I get it right =/
Date: 11/12/2011 12:36:06 PM Title: The Angel
Yay! You're back! Now I'm going to be refreshing all day waiting for updates. :-) I'm glad they're talking about it. And poor Marie...I'm so glad Logan had good timing. Favorite lines:
I was afraid, he thought.
“I was an asshole,” he said.
And, sorry, but I can't help laughing at this...:
Marie,” Logan repeated, inhaling deeply, every exhale carrying a hint of a growl. He needed to stop that, or she was going to realize something was wrong with him.
...thinking that poor Marie probably thinks he's asthmatic or something. ;-)
Author's Response: LOL yep. This was what I meant when I said a 'different' characterization of Logan. Poor guy's kind of embarrassed of his animal side. Not to worry; I'm sure Marie will disabuse him of that notion in no time.
Date: 11/12/2011 7:31:55 AM Title: The Names
What an amazing story you have here! Really, it is great.
So well written, and both Logan and Marie aro so well descrived, really amazing fic.
I read it in one go, and since the first chapter I know it will be one of my favourites...
One of the things I love about your story, is that you are not rushing things, you are taking your time. Indeed It looks like one of those long great stories, you know with more than 20 chapters....
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Anyway, I'm babling, I just wanted to congratulate you for your amzing fic.
Please, more!!! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far, and I will try to finish editing and posting the rest of the story very quickly :). Yep, it's definitely going to be more than 20 chapters. But hey, they're short chapters =)
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2011 8:19:01 PM Title: The Names
So...please? More? Like, now-ish? I swear, the last thing I do before I go to bed at night is refresh the site to see if you've posted, and it's the first thing I do in the morning. I really want to read the rest of this!
There are lots of great lines, but this is one was my favorite:
Logan would’ve whapped the idiot in the back of the head if he didn’t fear knocking his glasses off.
And I loved this too:
A soft growl came up in his throat before he could stop it. Oh. Oh hell.
Usually a whipped-puppy Marie would bother me a little, but this Marie is so pitch-perfect she's really sympathetic -- not at all maudlin or melodramatic. I'm not sure how you did it, but it's great to read.
Author's Response: LOL, Doc. Sorry to keep you waiting ;). Had a minor crisis at work which seriously cut into my fanfic time--no fairs! Stupid life. Anyways, I'm really glad you've enjoyed this story so far. And yeah, I felt kind of uncomfortable writing her character that way too, but as a product of her circumstances, it seemed more likely to me that she would become meek and skittish as a coping mechanism, rather than hardened and mean. But I think she'll come around some once she gets out of her terrible situation!