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Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 1:48:30 PM Title: The Breakfast

He is good for her. As soon as she gets used to him and knows he'd never hurt her intentionally. I love that he just wants to take care of her and will take whatever she'll give. His infatuation with her is adorable.

Author's Response: Isn't it though? I just love slightly damaged Logan. He's got this vulnerability, and this desire to be good, but he just isn't quite sure if he can. Guh.

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 1:47:15 PM Title: The Fear

Aw, that's heart-wrenching. Logan's so vulnerable with her. He just wants to be good for her... makes me sniffle.

Sooooo happy there's another chapter...

Author's Response: Yeah, he is such a good guy. He just doesn't know it yet. I think Marie will help him with that =)

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 1:20:25 PM Title: The Intruder

NOOOO! I hate when computers do weird shit and cause you to have to redo stuff. Ugh.

Ooh, protective Logan- WTH, Scott?? Barging your way into to Logan's room. Annoying!

Off to read the next!

Author's Response: Yeah, I think Scott just wasn't even thinking about how rude that was. Poor guy, and Jean too. I kind of made their characters oblivious, spoiled brats. Sort of like the X-Men: Evolution Jean and Scott. Haha!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 1:16:38 PM Title: The Morning After

Awwww, I just love this story! And I can't tell you how excited I was to see how many chapters are now posted!!!!! :D Even though I should be doing homework or editing some of my client's photos, I'm totally going to put that to the side now and read. hehe...

Author's Response: Photo editing, huh? Cool. Well sorry to distract you from your responsibilities! But thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 8:23:54 PM Title: The Intruder

Scott is such a turkey! Happy Thanksgiving!

Author's Response: Ha! Isn't he though. Poor guy; I think he realized his mistake the second he pushed that door open. Hope your Turkey Day was good too!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 7:38:23 PM Title: The Intruder

more more more

Author's Response: Gotcha. More. Now. Promise. Thanks for reviewing ;P

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 7:02:46 PM Title: The Angel

*big watery sigh*

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Date: 11/24/2011 6:58:37 PM Title: The Names

*sigh*

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Date: 11/24/2011 6:25:01 PM Title: The Confession

Awww that sad - good though.

Reviewer: Tamana Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 5:59:03 PM Title: The Intruder

I want Logan :-/
And updates

Author's Response: I want Logan too. But the updates, that I can give ya ;). Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 3:40:17 PM Title: The Intruder

This is going to have a middle nine chapters? SQUEE, OMG, where do I send the chocolates?!

Love how Logan and Marie are finding their way forward with each other. Thank you so much, and Happy Thanksgiving. :)

Author's Response: Girl please, don't talk to me about food after yesterday. I'm gonna be living on frickin' V8 and Diet Coke for a week LOL. Pretty sure I drank my body weight in cabernet. I hope the story continues to be entertaining for you =D and hope you had a great Thanksgiving too!

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 3:21:51 PM Title: The Intruder

And today I'm thankful for these chapters. Awesoooome! Happy Thanksgiving!

Author's Response: Aw thanks! I hope you had a good Thanksgiving too :)

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 2:13:47 PM Title: The Intruder

Hooray for more chapters -- although so sorry to hear you lost some! That is just tragic. I agree with the previous suggestion of using Google Docs to back stuff up. It's good for beta-ing too.

Poor Logan, faking a hangover. I think I'll be as relieved as he is when he finally can come clean about his mutation. And, yum. I'm glad he's not being shy about showing his feelings. I suspect Marie will do enough of that for both of them.

Geez, Scott is a dumbass. I have a feeling he and Jean are going to cause a bit more trouble, interfering bastards.

Thanks so much for posting chapters, and especially for letting me know there will be a break before you post more. Otherwise I would be stalking this site all day. Happy Thanksgiving! Looking forward to more chapters tonight if you're able. And so glad to hear this is just the middle...I had no idea how long this fic was going to be, but I already know I don't want it to end ever!

Author's Response: I started playing around with Google Docs yesterday and must say that is great advice :). Thanks for introducing me to it! And I think Marie already strongly believes Logan's a mutant; she's just so scared to get her hopes up, that one. But don't worry; their mutie status is soon to be brought in the open, if in a kinda traumatic way. And I'm glad the story isn't seeming to long for you! I started typing and.... it just kept going.... and going.... haha! Hope you had a great Thanksgiving

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 1:51:55 PM Title: The Intruder

I am really surprised Logan didn't pop his claws at Scott especially with the way he feels about Marie. Humm, I am curious as to where the physical voice is going to come in, maybe Logan finds out who hurt Marie.

I have gotten to where I post all of my drafts to google docs so if I lose a version I at least have them there. We are in the home stretch on the cooking here, Have a great Turkey Day!

Author's Response: I think it was a close call, but he's so desperate not to scare her off he managed to hold them in. Poor guy :(. That is a good idea about Google Docs. Hope you had a great Thanksgiving!

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 1:46:35 PM Title: The Intruder

OOO!! I cant wait! I love this fic! Logan's hang over scene had me LOL. His Wolverine possessive loving of Marie in bed and then his protective aggression aimed at Scott was perfect! I am grateful for the update. Happy Thanksgiving atmd! 10+ stars for updating on a busy Holiday too ;D

Author's Response: Aw thanks! I hope you like the direction the story ends up going :). Things get dark for a little while, but there's definitely more growly possessive Logan to come.

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 12:30:11 PM Title: The Intruder

I'd be so turned on by Logan right then. Sure, a little wary, naturally, but SO turned on. God...

Author's Response: Isn't possessive Logan just like, insanely hot? Guh.

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2011 12:25:24 PM Title: The Morning After

Hehe, Logan. I can just picture his expression here:
>>>He tilted his head and looked at her oddly for a moment, then took the pills with a gruff nod and downed them. “Yeah, I’m so hung over. Shit, my head. Thanks.”

Author's Response: Ha! I know it kinda spoils the whole gloom-and-doom tone I had going, but it was just too funny to pass up.

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 9:15:27 PM Title: The Convention

I love this story so much I just re-read it all over again. :) The vulnerability Logan has in it is touching and sweet. And you somehow pull it off while keeping him his manly self. Kudos to you.

Author's Response: Aw. That's definitely the highest compliment. So glad this story merited a re-read for you! I hope you enjoy the rest of it as well =)

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 7:52:52 PM Title: The Bright Spot

Oh, this is good! I cant wait to follow this one!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it =D

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 10:00:36 AM Title: The Convention

To quote another movie I like and I've added some things...

You have bewitched me body and soul with this story and I love... Love it, and I never wish to be parted from it or updates ever again!

I don't care if the updates are short. It works!

Author's Response: Wow, awesome review. You made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, hehe. Hopefully the quick updates and posting a couple of chapters at a time makes up for how short they are =D. I'm so happy you're enjoying the story; thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 6:56:53 AM Title: The Bright Spot

The real worst thing about the morning after scenario isn't regret. It's MORNING BREATH!!! nasty xXx

Author's Response: Ha, true that! Sorry to say, there is a morning-after kiss in this story. Yicky ;P

Reviewer: Tamana Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 6:28:42 AM Title: The Bright Spot

Your chapters are so short! But I guess they work well? So anyway, I totally feel Marie! Being afraid of getting exposed and being yourself with someone you like. Its the hardest, cause you dont wanna lose them, but you dont wanna lie to then either cause then it wouldnt be real :(

More please!!!!

Author's Response: Yes, the chapters are pretty short. For some reason it just worked out that way as I wrote it. But I try to post several chapters at a time to make up for that :). So glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Tamana Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 6:25:15 AM Title: The Drinks

Okay I read all the chapters last night, but promised I'd review today. So ummm... I really like this one :)

Author's Response: Haha I'm glad! Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review. It definitely inspires me to get my butt in gear and write more quickly :P.

Reviewer: Tamana Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 6:23:44 AM Title: The Convention

Omg really gooood!!!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 12:29:23 AM Title: The Bright Spot

I love that she knows him better than he knows himself. That she realizes he's damaged, broken, but still sees the good in him that he doesn't see. And, may I say that I'm so happy there was another chapter I hadn't noticed at first? ::happy dance:: THANK YOU!

Author's Response: Haha you are most welcome. That's been my favorite part of this story as I initially wrote it and as I go back and edit/polish--the fact that they are both damaged people, but they make each other a little bit better by being together. *swoon*

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