Reviews For The Private Dance
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Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2011 9:09:45 PM Title: The Plan

Yay, Scott is showing leadership. Good deal. I like how you led us as readers through the thought process so we can see why the X-Men are doing what they're doing.

Author's Response: Glad it worked. I was kind of rushing things, to be honest. The whole process of getting them home and recovered probably ended up a bit disjointed, but these 6 chapters were actually 11 chapters in the first draft. It just felt so bogged down. Stupid plot, interfering with the important stuff (read: romance and smut)!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2011 7:07:38 AM Title: The Plan

Better hurry police won't do any good.

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