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Date: 12/14/2011 12:49:19 AM Title: The Wolverine
And thanks, on the useless feedback. Just try. That's all I'm asking.
I LOL'd. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/05/2011 12:57:13 AM Title: The Wolverine
Ok, I am finally getting back to reading again!
I wanted to review each chapter, but I just got so caught up in the thick of everything that I couldn't stop hitting the NEXT button until it came to a skidding stop. I know this one review won't suffice, but I was just gripped by the feelings of both Logan & Marie.
I'm glad Jose got what he deserved especially after what he did to Marie and the countless other girls.
Another thing that really struck me is the fact that Wolverine is in her mind, protecting her and supporting her. It's like he's not just a dark beast locked and kept away, but he's doing what his mate needs.
Everything about this is painfully beautiful. I hope Marie gets to her mate soon.
Update please!
Thanks,
-Pepper
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and leaving such a thoughtful review! I'm glad you're getting back into this site. There sure are a lot of great stories. I'm really glad you've enjoyed this one. Anyway, thanks again for the feedback, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :)
[Report This]Date: 12/01/2011 12:18:50 PM Title: The Wolverine
I'm beginning to forgive you i suppose :-D xXx
Author's Response: Hee. So glad to be winning my way back into your graces ;)
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2011 11:36:24 PM Title: The Wolverine
i know it twisted but that was such a great ending to the b@$#$#. i'm grinning here. LOL!
Author's Response: Haha thanks so much. It was totally poetic justice. I think he deserved it =D. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Date: 11/30/2011 9:08:25 PM Title: The Wolverine
Such a great chapter. I like the she was the one to "end" Jose, but not really out of malice. And this:
You don't cower. Ever.
I need a Wolverine in my head giving me motivational speeches from time to time!
A very neat idea, that Inner!Wolverine wants him absorbed, to exact his revenge ad infinitum. And so awesome that she immediately recognizes Logan as her mate once she has his senses. I hope Marie can bring closure to the families and justice for those other girls.
Author's Response: Ooh, I want one too! An inspirational Wolverine. We should all have one, y'know? So this isn't really about my story, but can I just say I'm so excited to get caught up on 'Merchandise'? Gah, you ignore this site for one week, and when you come back, there's all kinds of exciting stuff to read =D
Date: 11/30/2011 7:52:07 PM Title: The Wolverine
ha! i'm not usually blood-thirsty but that git had it coming. still loving this story, looking forward to the next chapter(s). hobbits away, hey!
Author's Response: Yep, if anyone deserves eternal punishment at the hands of a claw-wielding mutant, it's creeps like Jose ;P. Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story
Date: 11/30/2011 6:48:01 PM Title: The Wolverine
Um, yeah. She really doesn't need to see that.
But SO HAPPY that she now knows he's her mate...er, or at least knows that that's what he thinks and also realizes how perfect their scents are together (wow, that could sound really awkward and stalkery in real life- so glad we Xman fans understand one another).
Again, fantastic chapter! Thank you for the rest of the installment. I look forward to the next!
P.S. I don't think I've said this yet, but I quite like the titles themselves and the cohesiveness of them.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the chapter titles. I thought maybe they were dorky, but better than, y'know 'Chapter 1, Chapter 2...'. Sorry to keep you waiting so long for the update! But I imagine you had finals too, so hopefully you understand ;P.
Date: 11/30/2011 6:45:31 PM Title: The Wolverine
How cool is it that Marie considers all of the other girls Jose killed and touched him AGAIN so she could get that information and bring closer to those families???
Author's Response: Very cool =). She's a much stronger person than she realizes.
Date: 11/30/2011 6:27:55 PM Title: The Wolverine
Lovely surprise to find this update. Keep it up
Date: 11/30/2011 6:27:32 PM Title: The Wolverine
Lovely surprise to find this update. Keep it up
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Sorry to keep everyone waiting on this latest update :). Finals, y'know. Ugh.
Date: 11/30/2011 3:36:23 PM Title: The Wolverine
ok. Thats awesome!!! Wolverine killing Jose in Marie's head too! Great update!! I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :). It just seemed like poetic justice to me. And plays nicely into the remainder of the plot!
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2011 3:13:29 PM Title: The Wolverine
Egad. Well, that's a fairly comprehensive comeuppance, yes. It's very satisfying. ;)
(And I'm sorry about being so logical. I'll try to post some useless feedback sometime. OMG LOGAN IS SO HAWT!!!!1!)
Author's Response: I felt the comeuppance was pretty all-encompassing as well. I mean, eternal hell in the mind of the girl you murdered, at the mercy of the man who loves her? Pretty much covers all the bases. And thanks, on the useless feedback. Just try. That's all I'm asking.
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2011 1:50:16 PM Title: The Wolverine
WOW!!! AWESOME!!!! I LOVE that! Perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I loved it too. Jose totally deserved it.
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2011 11:19:50 AM Title: The Wolverine
Oh that was fantastic,his enternal hell is in the mind of the woman he tried to murder with her lover as the judge, jury, and executioner--Wow that sounds painful even to me.
Author's Response: Nicely put! Yep, it's a pretty brutal comeuppance, really. But if anyone deserves that, it's scum like Jose. Yick.
Date: 11/30/2011 9:17:18 AM Title: The Wolverine
more please
Author's Response: Ha! Thank you sooo much for all the reviews, bima. It was really fun to sort of follow you along as you read the story and see your response to every chapter. Very amusing. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2011 8:41:39 AM Title: The Wolverine
Even in her mind, Logan is going to kick some ass. Love it.
Author's Response: Yep. That's gotta be Wolverine's dream come true. I almost feel bad for Jose--almost.
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2011 8:07:28 AM Title: The Wolverine
What a welcome surprise to see another chapter! Good ol wolverine!
Author's Response: I know, don'cha just love'im?