Reviews For The Private Dance
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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 9:09:23 AM Title: The Prayer

Aaaahhhhh!!!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2011 10:14:22 PM Title: The Prayer

Oh my...this is horribly sad. Especially that last bit of Marie praying. Just wanting to be told she was somebody. ::sniffle:: I just finished watching a sad movie that made me cry and this is just compounding the emotion. Where's Logan when you need him?

Author's Response: Aww sorry for contributing to your sadfest :(. I think Marie will find that she's someone though. She may not have been able to see it in that moment, but in the end she'll look back at what happened to her and actually won't regret it. And yeah, where the hell is Logan when you need him? At the Statehouse Convention Center thinking of strategies to woo Marie, of course ;)

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2011 4:38:16 PM Title: The Prayer

Augh, holy crap, the cliffhanger...! I'm about to keel over from the tension here--fantastic job ratcheting it up. Please tell me those footsteps aren't Jose...

Author's Response: Gotta tell you, I was really *really* tempted to have Logan step in right there and save the day. But in the end, this felt more realistic.

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