Reviews For The Private Dance
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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 9:01:53 AM Title: The Trick

I’ll drain him,

Good idea... but the thoughts she'll get maybe not so good.

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2011 10:05:31 PM Title: The Trick

Ugh, this guy is...well, *insert any of Logan's oh-so-eloquent insults*

And she should totally take him out if she needs to, but ew. To have him in her head would really suck.

Author's Response: So true. Having those kinds of thoughts in your head--and not just the thoughts, but the feelings that go along with them--would be terrible!

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2011 4:32:30 PM Title: The Trick

Gah. Tension liek whoa. He's just as creepy as I feared.

I’ll drain him, she told herself, as she always told herself

Oh, Marie, honey. That sounds just like a battered woman. What a horrible person.

Author's Response: He is a despicable person. I definitely think Marie's got some psychological issues from her time with him :(

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