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Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2011 4:42:14 PM Title: The Errand

AUGH, and know we know what Marie had to lose... D:

Author's Response: I didn't even think about that, but yeah. That was pretty much the *only* thing she had left to lose.

Reviewer: Novagrey21 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2011 12:51:36 AM Title: The Errand

These chapters are amazing I love your attention to detail. Now I'm ready for the next chapter with Marie facing Jose

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. I'm anxious to read your story too! =)

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 5:11:55 PM Title: The Errand

You are killing me with these short chapters. Killing me. I need to know more, NOW! Such a rollercoaster -- sorry that they both got to a point where they could talk about their mutations and then ducked away, glad that she agreed to go with him although somehow I don't think it's going to be that straightforward. But most of all, anxious for updates! Pretty please?

Author's Response: Ok! You will know more, in fact, before everyone else. That is, if you have time to look over the next five chapters on Google Docs before I post them. I'd really appreciate a little help =D. Pwease?

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 4:54:20 PM Title: The Errand

oh you evil evil tease!!! Cliff hanger!!! I loved the conversation at breakfast - why did you leave home, why are you here on business?? Ironically the answer is the same for both of them. I am really curious as to what is up with Jose and I would lay money Logan is going to have to kick his ass before the tooo long.

Author's Response: Oh yeah. Jose is a seriously sick dude. The only good thing I can say about it is that I PROMISE I will write a story at some point where Marie like, goes to the spa and buys some new shoes and then has a nice dinner with Logan or something. Because I kinda let her get eaten by a pack of wolves in 'Feral' and well, let's just say the upcoming chapters aren't going to be any nicer to her. Poor girl.

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 4:19:49 PM Title: The Errand

Oh, I have a feeling Jose is in for it.

Love it!

Author's Response: Oh, Jose is definitely a piece of work. Just wait and see.

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 3:41:24 PM Title: The Errand

ahh! Dammit. I hate cliffhangers. I have a feeling Logan is going to kick this guys ass. Either that or Wolverine is going to shishcabob him. heh. ;D

Author's Response: Or perhaps both. Double heh. ;D

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 2:36:01 PM Title: The Errand

Shut up, Marie's Voices. Y'all suck. I'm curious now how many people she had to put down on her cross-country odyssey that she has that many hateful inmates in her head.

Feeling stronger than she had in ages, Marie cut right through their bullshit, banished every doubt with a single question: What do I have to lose?

Awesomesauce. Living in constant anxiety and fear is so corrosive to the self esteem, but it's amazing how being around people who support you can start helping. I love watching how Marie is gaining back her confidence.

Author's Response: Yes, yes. I definitely agree. Doctorg called this the 'whipped puppy' Marie, and I have to agree with her there. But there is going to be growth throughout the story, and a lot of those wounds are going to start healing. Underneath all the shit that's beat her down over the years, there's still a sassy southern belle in there somewhere!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 2:31:17 PM Title: The Errand

Damn, who is this Jose to her??? Is he the one who hits her? Grrr...maybe Logan should be waiting in the car. sigh. Thanks for so many new chapters! I look forward to more!!!

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