You used the phrase abject horror. Correctly. You sure you don't want those chocolates? Seriously, it's such a pleasure to read well-written fiction by writers with a command of grammar and vocabulary.

Love the development of Marie's backstory and the slow deepening of her bond with Logan.

Author's Response: LOL. I'm so glad you appreciated the turn of phrase. I usually try not to let the words get in the way of the story or do anything overly prosey, but that one must've slipped through somehow ;). Yeah, I feel kind of bad for you, honestly. As an editor, it must be downright *painful* to read some fanfiction!