Reviews For The Private Dance
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 7:52:52 PM Title: The Bright Spot

Oh, this is good! I cant wait to follow this one!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it =D

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 6:56:53 AM Title: The Bright Spot

The real worst thing about the morning after scenario isn't regret. It's MORNING BREATH!!! nasty xXx

Author's Response: Ha, true that! Sorry to say, there is a morning-after kiss in this story. Yicky ;P

Reviewer: Tamana Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 6:28:42 AM Title: The Bright Spot

Your chapters are so short! But I guess they work well? So anyway, I totally feel Marie! Being afraid of getting exposed and being yourself with someone you like. Its the hardest, cause you dont wanna lose them, but you dont wanna lie to then either cause then it wouldnt be real :(

More please!!!!

Author's Response: Yes, the chapters are pretty short. For some reason it just worked out that way as I wrote it. But I try to post several chapters at a time to make up for that :). So glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 12:29:23 AM Title: The Bright Spot

I love that she knows him better than he knows himself. That she realizes he's damaged, broken, but still sees the good in him that he doesn't see. And, may I say that I'm so happy there was another chapter I hadn't noticed at first? ::happy dance:: THANK YOU!

Author's Response: Haha you are most welcome. That's been my favorite part of this story as I initially wrote it and as I go back and edit/polish--the fact that they are both damaged people, but they make each other a little bit better by being together. *swoon*

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2011 10:06:40 PM Title: The Bright Spot

I will provide you something more indeapth later but I just wanted to let you know I am loving this. It is beautiful and finding the updates yesterday really really made my day.

Author's Response: Aww thanks :). I'm pretty sure that's how every reader on this site feels when they see an update to 'Everything'.

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2011 9:30:31 PM Title: The Bright Spot

Aw, poor Marie. Can't wait to see how these two move forward.

Author's Response: Yeah, poor Marie. Things are about to get a little worse too =/. But moving forward, there will be a happy ending!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2011 9:30:13 PM Title: The Bright Spot

I'd love to leave a review, but I'm too busy frantically refreshing, hoping to see the next chapter up... ;-)

Aw, Marie's thoughts are so sweet. And very clever idea, having Marie have absorbed a stripper's memories. I was kind of wondering how she was so "expert" with the dancing and...other things. ;-)

Author's Response: LOL I'm so sorry I left ya hanging! Things have been crazy busy erghh. Thank God for the holiday weekend. Hopefully I can get the rest of this story churned out and run the next chapter of Feral by you! Yeah, you didn't think I'd have a reason for suddenly turning Marie into a confident sex goddess? Silly, silly ;)

You must login (register) to review.