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Date: 11/21/2011 12:56:31 AM Title: The Names
Wow, this story is so touching.
Date: 11/12/2011 7:31:55 AM Title: The Names
What an amazing story you have here! Really, it is great.
So well written, and both Logan and Marie aro so well descrived, really amazing fic.
I read it in one go, and since the first chapter I know it will be one of my favourites...
One of the things I love about your story, is that you are not rushing things, you are taking your time. Indeed It looks like one of those long great stories, you know with more than 20 chapters....
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Anyway, I'm babling, I just wanted to congratulate you for your amzing fic.
Please, more!!! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far, and I will try to finish editing and posting the rest of the story very quickly :). Yep, it's definitely going to be more than 20 chapters. But hey, they're short chapters =)
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2011 8:19:01 PM Title: The Names
So...please? More? Like, now-ish? I swear, the last thing I do before I go to bed at night is refresh the site to see if you've posted, and it's the first thing I do in the morning. I really want to read the rest of this!
There are lots of great lines, but this is one was my favorite:
Logan would’ve whapped the idiot in the back of the head if he didn’t fear knocking his glasses off.
And I loved this too:
A soft growl came up in his throat before he could stop it. Oh. Oh hell.
Usually a whipped-puppy Marie would bother me a little, but this Marie is so pitch-perfect she's really sympathetic -- not at all maudlin or melodramatic. I'm not sure how you did it, but it's great to read.
Author's Response: LOL, Doc. Sorry to keep you waiting ;). Had a minor crisis at work which seriously cut into my fanfic time--no fairs! Stupid life. Anyways, I'm really glad you've enjoyed this story so far. And yeah, I felt kind of uncomfortable writing her character that way too, but as a product of her circumstances, it seemed more likely to me that she would become meek and skittish as a coping mechanism, rather than hardened and mean. But I think she'll come around some once she gets out of her terrible situation!
[Report This]Date: 11/09/2011 2:49:17 PM Title: The Names
Aww just read all of these chapters and really like this story :-D sweetness xXx
[Report This]Date: 11/09/2011 2:47:41 PM Title: The Names
Aww just read all of these chapters and really like this story :-D sweetness xXx
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Here and at FFnet ;)
Date: 11/08/2011 11:13:53 PM Title: The Names
I LOVE this story. Love it! You always come up with such interesting scenarios, and you play the characters so well. Really, really great stuff. I just read this entire story right now and wanting more! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you like the scenario and how the characters. It's weird; this one practically wrote itself in one sitting. I've gone back and tweaked things and added a lot of detail, but Logan and Marie did most of the work, haha
Date: 11/08/2011 8:32:17 PM Title: The Names
Love it! Cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're liking it so far, and thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 11/08/2011 12:09:14 AM Title: The Names
I LOVE IT! The short chapters are really exactly how much information that the reader needs to make the story. The rhythm of the entire thing is perfect. I adore the line about Scott and Jean being spoiled children, it is soo who they are sometimes. I started reading this and you were at chapter 15 so finding chapter 16 at the end was like a present! Now I will spend the next couple of days stalking the site for chapter 17.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're liking it. The pacing felt right to me too, so I'm glad the short chapters aren't too jarring. Lol at the site stalking. I have to confess I do that too sometimes :P