I just realized just how many chapters of this wonderful story I hadn't reviewed. Let's work on that...

Interesting. You've made Jean and Scott very bratty, yes, but it doesn't seem like they're actually evil or hateful, just arrogant and self centered. I liked the detail about Ororo, too. Faultlines showing...

Author's Response: Heh, awesome! It was very cool to log on and see all the reviews. And yes, I almost think I made them too bratty and one-dimensional, but they'll become a little more dynamic towards the end of the story. I see them as the preppy/popular/slightly spoiled Scott and Jean from X-Men Evolution =)