Reviews For Don't Walk Away
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Reviewer: Mezza999 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2012 3:26:02 AM Title: Wolverine

next chapter! next chapter! i hope u update the next chapter on FF website

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2012 10:57:53 AM Title: Wolverine

Really hoping life gives you the time to update more often, when there are long gaps between chapters I tend to lose the plot.

Author's Response: I am so sorry!!! I honestly cringed when I read this!! Good for you for chastising me and my laziness! I promise to start the next chapter ASAP! Hopefully you enjoyed the chapter despite it being so long overdue!

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2012 7:33:25 PM Title: Wolverine

yay you updated!!!! but boo rogue's kidnapped! but yay that logan is recognizing marie as his mate! please write more soon, i'm desperate for more!

Author's Response: Yay!! Sorry for the long interruption between updates! I promise to do my best to speed u my updates. I seriously disliked Mystique so she'll get hers in the next chapter I think...Woo hoo for Logan's realization. Now he just has to go and get her! Thanks for the review!! :)

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2012 4:50:07 PM Title: Wolverine

Gasp! Dammit! Go get her Logan!!

Author's Response: Yeah!! GO LOGAN!!! ;) Thanks for the review!! I honestly don't know what I'd do without your continuing encouragement!

Reviewer: nyzeair Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2012 11:29:35 AM Title: Wolverine

Okay, that was definitely a quick realization. But you can't expect the Wolverine to make something like a pro-con-list, can you? And he definitly doesn't care about human laws.
I didn't thhink Sabretooth would play punching-ball for Wolverine. I mean, a fighting enemy is as a good distraction as a passive enemy with his qualities. And why didn't Wolverine aim for the throat? I believe animal predators usually do so. And as Sabretooth also is a fast healer, it would be obvious.
That was a little stupid by Marie. Where should Mystique has come from?
Now it's going to be a race: Will Mystiwue reach the helicopter (I'm sure they have one) fast enough or will Logan catch up with them? I think the X-Men'll arrive and hinder the departure.
Good job!

Author's Response: Sigh...all valid points. Unfortunately the original chapter was a little longer, a little different and there was a more extensive fight scene. But that chapter got deleted when I spilled OJ on my laptop and had to redo it. It was pretty discouraging and this chapter suffered for my impatience. Excuses, excuses. Bear with me and my confusing inaccuracies. Hopefully you enjoyed it otherwise. Thanks for the review and for keeping on my toes! As for the Xmen appearing...we shall see. ;)

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