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Reviewer: Mezza999 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2012 3:26:02 AM Title: Wolverine

next chapter! next chapter! i hope u update the next chapter on FF website

Reviewer: annie77 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2012 4:57:13 AM Title: Marie

Iam reading this at 4am and I cant stop, please continue!!!

Author's Response: Yay!! I love to hear that my story is that addictive. I hope that I can update quick enough so you're not kept in suspense too long! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2012 10:57:53 AM Title: Wolverine

Really hoping life gives you the time to update more often, when there are long gaps between chapters I tend to lose the plot.

Author's Response: I am so sorry!!! I honestly cringed when I read this!! Good for you for chastising me and my laziness! I promise to start the next chapter ASAP! Hopefully you enjoyed the chapter despite it being so long overdue!

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2012 7:33:25 PM Title: Wolverine

yay you updated!!!! but boo rogue's kidnapped! but yay that logan is recognizing marie as his mate! please write more soon, i'm desperate for more!

Author's Response: Yay!! Sorry for the long interruption between updates! I promise to do my best to speed u my updates. I seriously disliked Mystique so she'll get hers in the next chapter I think...Woo hoo for Logan's realization. Now he just has to go and get her! Thanks for the review!! :)

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2012 4:50:07 PM Title: Wolverine

Gasp! Dammit! Go get her Logan!!

Author's Response: Yeah!! GO LOGAN!!! ;) Thanks for the review!! I honestly don't know what I'd do without your continuing encouragement!

Reviewer: nyzeair Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2012 11:29:35 AM Title: Wolverine

Okay, that was definitely a quick realization. But you can't expect the Wolverine to make something like a pro-con-list, can you? And he definitly doesn't care about human laws.
I didn't thhink Sabretooth would play punching-ball for Wolverine. I mean, a fighting enemy is as a good distraction as a passive enemy with his qualities. And why didn't Wolverine aim for the throat? I believe animal predators usually do so. And as Sabretooth also is a fast healer, it would be obvious.
That was a little stupid by Marie. Where should Mystique has come from?
Now it's going to be a race: Will Mystiwue reach the helicopter (I'm sure they have one) fast enough or will Logan catch up with them? I think the X-Men'll arrive and hinder the departure.
Good job!

Author's Response: Sigh...all valid points. Unfortunately the original chapter was a little longer, a little different and there was a more extensive fight scene. But that chapter got deleted when I spilled OJ on my laptop and had to redo it. It was pretty discouraging and this chapter suffered for my impatience. Excuses, excuses. Bear with me and my confusing inaccuracies. Hopefully you enjoyed it otherwise. Thanks for the review and for keeping on my toes! As for the Xmen appearing...we shall see. ;)

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2012 10:04:24 PM Title: Untitled

ugh, I just NEED to have more of this soon!!

Author's Response: So happy you NEED it!!! Makes me that much more eager to complete the next chapter! Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: nyzeair Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2012 11:36:18 AM Title: Untitled

It seems like all my favorite stories are updated these days...
Okay, Marie has quiet grown-up thoughts about Logan. ^^ It's fascinating how much trust she puts into him. And Logan continues to be friendlier than I expected him to be.
Wolverine can problably smell her arousal and that's not helpful for his self restraint.
Now it starts to get interesting. Are you going to let Sabretooth kick Logan's ass like he did in the movie?

Author's Response: I hated how in the movie Sabretooth took Wolverine out so quickly so probably not...I too was surprised at how friendly Logan was being...tried to write it diffferent but like I mentioned wasn't exactly satisfied with that chapter but I figured you guys deserved an update...So just going to mention that sooner rather than later this story will live up to its NC-17 rating...and I'm pretty sure the X-men will be making their entrance in the next chapter...thanks for the review. I love the input, it really helps me...(^_^)

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2012 9:51:34 PM Title: Marie

soooo good!

Author's Response: Those two words made my night!! Promise to update soon, just got caught up in other people's fanfics and work-related stuff...thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2012 9:41:28 PM Title: Sweet Temptation

so impressed you wrote this on your phone! please keep writing!

Reviewer: nyzeair Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2012 5:18:39 AM Title: Marie

Really nice. I like your writing style. I hope there'll be more chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks!!! Sometimes I feel like I'm too awkward with some's a relief to know my writing style isn't as awkward as I had feared...:)

Reviewer: Melarina Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2012 12:37:50 AM Title: Marie

I love stories like yours, where Logan, or at Wolverine knows Marie is HIS and she's all innocent but still dangerous in her own right. Love to read more and I hope your laptop gets fixed soon.

Author's Response: Aww thanks! Hope so too! Tried posting a new chapter a couple of times but so far it's not working...:C. I will try to get a new chapter up asap...

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2012 1:16:15 AM Title: Marie

I love this!! I can't believe you typed all that on your cell. That would suck. Hope you were able to get your laptop back. This is excellent. Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: still waiting for my laptop to be sent back to me!!! and still writing on my cellphone so its challenging but writing this has been fun!!!

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 5:26:19 PM Title: Marie

HAHA! I just love how this part:

"Of course i'll drop you off wherever you want to go 'fore i head up there." Of course that was a lie but he would ease her into it. "I ain't going to leave you stranded with me for the rest a winter." That's exactly what the Wolverine wanted.

Author's Response: wow did i write that? hahaha. glad you like the story. :)

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 5:23:04 PM Title: Marie

fuck awesome story! please update again soon, i love it!!!

Author's Response: i am working on the next chapter riiiiiiight now!!!

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 3:44:12 PM Title: Marie

Well, you better not leave us, Logan! We need more story! Loving it so far!

Author's Response: Logan's a stubborn one and i see trouble ahead but he'll see the light eventually!!!

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 3:35:10 PM Title: Mine

Oooh, loved this part. I am reading on. Keep writing!

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 3:21:59 PM Title: Sweet Temptation

Don't know why, but I am picturing Brute in women's underwear... Maybe my Wolvie Muse thinks its funny to focus on that instead of the sweet temptation of the girl. I like the start of this so far!

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 12:19:56 AM Title: Marie

Omg, MORE soon please!!!

Author's Response: Asap I hope. Working on another chapter right now. Thanks for reading AND reviewing!!! :)

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 12:19:22 AM Title: Marie

Omg, MORE soon please!!!

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2011 12:15:39 AM Title: Mine

Yea!!! I love me a possessive Wolverine!! Thank you for the update. I hope to read more SOON! Love this fic...

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2011 7:06:43 PM Title: Sweet Temptation

Hmm, love the sweet like a virgin but he wasn't attracted to them. I am sort of so surprised that he'd be so distracted so easily... But her temptation must have been strong. Reading on!

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