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Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2012 3:03:19 AM Title: Chapter 12

Excited excited excited!! This story is moving right along! I am excited to read about this encounter between siblings!!

Author's Response: I know! I have been keeping that little secret for some time. Thanks for being so excited!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2011 3:17:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wah! Poor Logan so much is going on! I hope everything gets figured out! Keep up the good work. Also love the beginning ;)

Author's Response: Howdy, I deleted the other two reviews because they were copies of this one. Glad you like what you read so far. More should be coming soon. Gotta deal with the aftermath... Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2011 10:03:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great work, and a Happy New Years to you too!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. Happy New Year!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2011 9:52:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter, love the suspence! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's comin up...

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2011 9:43:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

I really liked this chapter a lot. Can't wait to see how things turn out when Logan meets the real Lara and finds out Lara and Lily are his kin.

Author's Response: Yeah, dun,dun,duh. Big mystery comin up...

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2011 9:29:40 PM Title: Chapter 9

Happy that Logan got his fight in, and his round with his girl. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Yeah, Wolvie was needing to blow off some steam. He did and then made a fresh new batch of steam with Marie. I liked the showing of his jealous side.

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2011 9:06:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

LOL, I don't think that I've ever heard Logan say Okey dokey before. That's a new one for me. Great chapter, who knew that Logan would turn down Marie for a fight. ;) Of course the Wolverine could use some needed sparring. And more with the food. I've got to get me some food too. LOL Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Yeah, he just slipped it in there. Maybe he was channeling his inner Jubilee? He couldn't turn her down for long... Yeah, gotta keep my muses fed. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2011 8:48:29 PM Title: Chapter 7

LOL, Great chapter. It's made me as hungry as a Wolverine. Wish I had some finger licking good ribs right about now. LOL Keep up the great work. Thanks for the shout out! I'm always happy to help inspire another writer. ;)

Author's Response: Your welcome! Thank you for your review. The ribs were a real life disaster from my birthday 2011. Now that it's a new year, I'm gonna pick a better place to eat out at.

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2011 3:23:45 AM Title: Chapter 10

Ahh cliff hanger! More more! Give me more! Things are really starting to pick up! Can't wait to devour the next chapter! Also happy holidays!

Author's Response: Bwahahahaha! I am two pages into the next update. I will be writing more tonight before Santa Logan carries me off to bed. I will try to send more to my beta before I have another proceedure on my arm done on Tues. Hugs and Merry Christmas or Xmas if you are a mutant!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2011 3:21:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

Gotta love it when Wolvie is kicking ass! Nice chapter, loving this story! :)

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! Yeah half nekkid Wolvie fighting is always good. We are glad you like it. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2011 2:10:41 AM Title: Chapter 8

Alright! Can't wait for the next chapter update! I am soooo looking forward to Logan kicking some ass!

Author's Response: Hahaha, I am writing that ass kicking right now. Will try to get it up sooner than the last update.

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2011 1:56:07 AM Title: Chapter 7

Yay! New chapter update! And as always it is a pleasure to read! I'm happy Marie is finally feeling better! Also I hope a sabertooth butt wooping is in the near future ;)

Author's Response: We will have to see... Logan has a meeting with his destiny first with some major revelations. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2011 3:12:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

Uh-oh, I wonder if Ororo is doing the right thing planning such a big wedding, with Logan and Marie only wanting something simple. I hope they won't be upset. Oh, poor Tigger and Marie. I hope Logan kicks Sabertooths butt good time. I can't believe Logan was considering having Victor as his best man. I'm sure he won't now. Poor Tigger. ;( Can't wait to see what revelation Logan is going to have next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Are you really sure? Hmmm... We shall see. Yeah, poor Tigger.

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2011 3:06:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh boy, won't Marie and Logan be surprised at the wedding that Ororo is planning. I can't wait to see the out come. It's going to be a big bang of an event. ;) Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Yeah, but who knows... Will they agree to it or get hitched in Vegas?

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2011 3:03:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm happy to see that the Wolverine is realizing that Marie isn't his toy to beat up, she is his to take care of and treat well. Yea! Seems like the plans for the wedding are all coming together. Great job.

Author's Response: Yeah, and I think she becomes more compassionate towards the Wolverine. She understands him more. Yup, its gonna be a rockin party if Ro and Gang can pull it off.

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2011 2:58:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm glad Marie has her horse to talk too. I'm happy to see that Logan is letting Charles help him sort his memories and compartmentalize them. I hope that will help him in the future. Keep up the great work. I like this chapter better. ;)

Author's Response: I am glad you like this better. And technically, the horse belongs to the Professor. We will have to see if it does help...

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2011 2:55:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

I don't know how much more Logan can take. This movie is tearing him apart. If he learns of his dead wife and son, it may just destroy him. I have a hard time dealing with what Wolverine did to Marie. I'm glad Marie is so forgiving, loving, and has a healing factor, but he can't continue to mistreat her everytime get upset with her. Logan has got to get control over his animal side. I hope for a happier chapter next time, keep up great work.

Author's Response: Yeah, I did too but that is part of why Marie erased it from his mind. If he knew what he had done exactly, it would have destroyed him inside that he had hurt Marie that badly. Don't forget, there is more movie to come...

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2011 2:47:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad to see that the wedding plans are finally getting settled. I'm a little worried how Logan is going to handle the rest of the movie. Great start to the new story

Author's Response: Good to see you back in the pack. Thank you. I don't really know myself either. I guess he will take it one scene at a time.

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2011 10:05:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

More! More! I must have more! Sabertooth is such a dick! Logan better give him whats coming to him!

Author's Response: LOL, I have brought you more... Go check for the update. Hehe :)

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2011 9:56:04 PM Title: Chapter 5

For shame on your other followers lol. I will always keep reading your stories! They are just so awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. I might have to send my other followers to detention with Logan... Thank you. More awesomeness will be ready soon!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2011 12:37:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

Brilliant chapter! I'm glad things are getting back to normal...for now at least lol. Can't wait for Victor to make his appearance!

Author's Response: Oh thank you! Thank you for reading and reviewing! Victor should make his appearance possibly in the next update. If not he will be in the update after that. And you can bet he will be a very bad, bad boy.

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2011 12:24:35 AM Title: Chapter 3

Yay update! And ahh poor Marie! Poor Logan!! This is really testing Marie I hope she stays strong!

Author's Response: Yeay, thanks for your review! Seems like my other reviewers have dropped off. I thank you for still reading my work. Both Marie and Logan will be tested with this part of the story. But, I have to put them in a tough spot so that we will come out on the other side with a happy ending!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 12:45:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

Amazing start to this sequel. Poor Marie! Good thinking on her part though, I could only imagine what Logan would do if he remembered what he did to her :(

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, it would be rough I think. He might even figure out what happened on his own. Working on the next two chapters! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Xgirl14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 12:33:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh hooray!! The next story is up!! I can't explain how excited I am for this! Thank you!!! Ahhhh!!!

Author's Response: Hehe, your welcome! Yup, the rock and roll wild ride continues!

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