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Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 4:39:12 PM Title: Part Two Prey or Predator

HAHAH, I read this with the biggest grin on my face. I LOVE it!! And giving him the best orgasm hes ever had, making him pass out...thats hot. I mean, its LOGAN. That must have been one HELL of an orgasm. More soon please!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you loved it. I couldn't help but smile as I wrote this piece as well. I was feel a little naughty when I wrote it. I just couldn't help myself at having Logan pass out. I mean he always has the reputation for being able to keep going and going. And I'm all for that, but even Logan needs a little reprieve and a little or a lot of fun. Right now Part two is as far as I've gotten. I'm not sure exact how I want this piece to end, but I'm thinking on it. I hope it will be soon. Thanks again for reviewing and telling me what you thought.

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 7:01:42 AM Title: Part Two Prey or Predator

No, no, no. The story is perfect! I love it! I hope you have more somewhere!

The only thing I would suggest is getting a good beta to help with the grammar. Hugs!

Author's Response: Thanks for your great review and your hugs. I love them both! ;) Right now, part two is as far has I have gotten. There might be one more part down the road, but I'm not sure exactly how I want it to go. So we'll just have to wait and see if anything jumps out at me and wants to written. Thanks again for your support and suggestion. I would love to find a beta that I can get a long with and can help me with those pesky grammer errors.

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