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Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 9:53:53 AM Title: Part 1

I would like to step up and be a partial beta for you, if you want help with spelling.

Don't worry I was so bad with English in Jr. High they wouldn't let me take Spanish! I am terrible at tenses. But I guess it takes practice. Hugs!

Email me if you wanna hook up.

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 6:46:17 AM Title: Part 1

Don't you dare change this first part! I did find some grammar errors, but I am overlooking them for how great the story is.

Love, love, love the idea that Rogue could be a mythical woodland nymph. And particularly loved Jean in this... And I usually hate her. Keeping Rogue's secret was priceless! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. Some time ago, I had lost interest in writing anything. I just couldn't find the motivation to write, so I did a lot of reading. Then one day this baby popped in my head, and I had to write it down. It started out just as Part one, that was and is suppose to be called Prey. I forgot to title Part one. I had planned on leaving it as is, but some months later Part two: Prey or predator popped into my head, and I knew it would be a perfect addition to Prey. I also usually dislike Jean too. Her character is just to easy to dislike, but I wanted to challenge myself to write a nice Jean for once. I was very proud of myself for being nice to her. I'm sure there are plenty of grammer errors. I will be the first to admit that I suck at grammer and spelling. I struggled all through school with it. K-12, and even through my college classes. Feel free to point out the errors and I'll do my best to correct them. If you know any beta reader who would be interested in helping me, send them my way. :D I'm not sure how to contact or work with a beta. Thanks again for your kind words and sharing your thoughts with me.

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