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Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2011 2:53:53 PM Title: Part 1

I would like to step up and be a partial beta for you, if you want help with spelling.

Don't worry I was so bad with English in Jr. High they wouldn't let me take Spanish! I am terrible at tenses. But I guess it takes practice. Hugs!

Email me if you wanna hook up.

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 8:39:12 PM Title: Part Two Prey or Predator

HAHAH, I read this with the biggest grin on my face. I LOVE it!! And giving him the best orgasm hes ever had, making him pass out...thats hot. I mean, its LOGAN. That must have been one HELL of an orgasm. More soon please!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you loved it. I couldn't help but smile as I wrote this piece as well. I was feel a little naughty when I wrote it. I just couldn't help myself at having Logan pass out. I mean he always has the reputation for being able to keep going and going. And I'm all for that, but even Logan needs a little reprieve and a little or a lot of fun. Right now Part two is as far as I've gotten. I'm not sure exact how I want this piece to end, but I'm thinking on it. I hope it will be soon. Thanks again for reviewing and telling me what you thought.

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 11:01:42 AM Title: Part Two Prey or Predator

No, no, no. The story is perfect! I love it! I hope you have more somewhere!

The only thing I would suggest is getting a good beta to help with the grammar. Hugs!

Author's Response: Thanks for your great review and your hugs. I love them both! ;) Right now, part two is as far has I have gotten. There might be one more part down the road, but I'm not sure exactly how I want it to go. So we'll just have to wait and see if anything jumps out at me and wants to written. Thanks again for your support and suggestion. I would love to find a beta that I can get a long with and can help me with those pesky grammer errors.

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 10:46:17 AM Title: Part 1

Don't you dare change this first part! I did find some grammar errors, but I am overlooking them for how great the story is.

Love, love, love the idea that Rogue could be a mythical woodland nymph. And particularly loved Jean in this... And I usually hate her. Keeping Rogue's secret was priceless! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. Some time ago, I had lost interest in writing anything. I just couldn't find the motivation to write, so I did a lot of reading. Then one day this baby popped in my head, and I had to write it down. It started out just as Part one, that was and is suppose to be called Prey. I forgot to title Part one. I had planned on leaving it as is, but some months later Part two: Prey or predator popped into my head, and I knew it would be a perfect addition to Prey. I also usually dislike Jean too. Her character is just to easy to dislike, but I wanted to challenge myself to write a nice Jean for once. I was very proud of myself for being nice to her. I'm sure there are plenty of grammer errors. I will be the first to admit that I suck at grammer and spelling. I struggled all through school with it. K-12, and even through my college classes. Feel free to point out the errors and I'll do my best to correct them. If you know any beta reader who would be interested in helping me, send them my way. :D I'm not sure how to contact or work with a beta. Thanks again for your kind words and sharing your thoughts with me.

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