Reviews For Escape to Alaska
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Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2011 8:50:02 AM Title: Chapter the Fourth

“Is it safe?” I joked. “I’m more than a match for the bugs in the walls.” “Did you have to tell me about them?” I moaned. “I was happier not knowing.”

Ha! I loved this. What a cute moment. This Logan and Rogue have such great banter. I'm liking the Rogue/Marie moments too.

And thank you, thank you, a million times thank you for not overdoing the scene in the bar where the guy came up to hit on her. So many people would've made him come up and grab her out of the blue and try to have his wicked way with her or something, LOL, but you made it really realistic. Nice. Off to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I try to just let the banter come naturally but I often get worried it doesn't come out quite right. rnrnYou make me blush with your reviews =)

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 9:36:04 PM Title: Chapter the Fourth

I'm really liking this! This was particularly neat.

I needed to check on the walls before sleep. I remember thinking “barbaric” a few times during the fights so there was a possibility Erik had made a new crack somewhere.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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