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[Report This]Date: 10/30/2011 11:21:23 PM Title: Chapter the Third
I don't actually know how to play pool. Sorry if anyone was really looking forward to that scene.
Not sure why, but your Author's Note made me LOL. Hard.
I'm really enjoying this so far! Not sure how I missed the first couple of chapters, but I'm glad I noticed it and was able to catch up :). There are so many stories where Logan drags Marie out on the road with him; I love the twist, and her turning on the charm and hustling pool is just too great. Or perhaps it's Logan's jealousy over it that's great. Regardless, there's definite greatness in there somewhere.
“Listen, kid, I’ve been around for a while, I know the good spots,” he teased right back.
“I guess I will bow to your far greater experience in this matter,” I said gravely.
Ummm.... is it wrong that I totally took this as innuendo? =D
Great story so far! I'm liking the tone of it, lighthearted with just the right touch of angst. Looking forward to the next chapter, for sure.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you could find greatness somewhere. Your review really made me feel like I was doing a good job. I'm never sure if I get their silly banter quite right so I'm excited to hear that you found it light-hearted and not strange. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 10/30/2011 1:47:48 PM Title: Chapter the Third
I really like how you're developing the relationship between them. Again, the way you're only using Marie's point of view, so that Logan's motives and emotions seem mysterious -- it's very intriguing. You do the angst really well, but this bit of foof has to be my favorite line:
“It’s not like we’re shopping for pink frilly things and rainbows,” Logan protested. “Camping gear, that’s manly shopping.”
Author's Response: I giggled a little when I wrote it.