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Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 8:18:44 PM Title: Black Knight

She couldn’t remember where she was or how she got there, but the thumpity- thump in her chest was hard and fast and terrible. ***I see her as a scared child in this scene rather than a 24 year old. Poor girl***

Some broken synapses in her brain fired once, three times, unexpectedly she remembered only his name, that he’d gifted her the ribbon, and that she liked touching him. She crawled forward to wrap her arms around one of his legs just as he was turning around to her.
***I second my last statement***

“Logan.” It came out on the heels of a bright eyed smirk. ***I laughed. I like it***

Uglies tasted nasty. When she had his hand open, and the vulnerable flesh between his thumb and finger bared to her, she did what instinct called for. She bit him. *** Two things. How the hell does she know what Uglies taste like? And she really likes biting him does she?***

Author's Response: Yes. Marie likes biting Logan. She knows what they taste like because she bitten the uglies before, while she's been toted around and foghting to get free.

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