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I'm with it! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm trying to work through some ideas, but I hope to have the next chapter out soon.
Oh I enjoyed it alright. lol Logan, Marie and 2 small children = total cuteness! Love how sensitive Logan was and how he is softening for Marie and the kids. Its wonderful to see a hard edged man turn into putty for a woman and kids.
Author's Response: I'm so thrilled that you are enjoying it. I know, right? Logan is a softy a heart. I think under all that badness, is a heart of gold just waiting for the right person or people.
Can't wait for more. I'm excited =)
Author's Response: I'm excited that you're excited. I hope to have more out soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
I'm intrigued to see where this is going and will keep reading. I like seeing strong Rogue fics and the element of the two children is interesting as well.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I hope you continue to enjoy.
dang you just blew my Evil Chuck theory right out of the water. lol Glad I don't have to wonder anymore though. lol. can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Ha Ha! Sorry no evil Chuck this time. Although I do have an evil Chuck story partly written, but it is no where near ready to post. Darn, I should have made you ponder longer and find out later, ;) (evil laugh) Anyway thanks for reviewing and I hope you continue to enjoy.
I almost wish I had two kids like those. I can't wait to read more as I work on the next two chapters of my story for you. Hugs!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I love Nate and Sally too. They just help make this story. I can't to read more from you either. Hugs right back at you!
I like the tit for tat between Logan and Rogue. I think the kids are adorable. I am reading on!
Author's Response: Thanks WolvieDoesItBest. Both Logan and Rogue need strong parnters to be able to deal with all their background. That's why I think Logan and Rogue in this story are perfect for each other. Sally and Nate are just to precious. I think that Logan and Rogue are the perfect people to help them heal. I think they are going to help Rogue and Logan heal too.
I still wonder why Charles is so anxious to get Rogue back to the school. I might be overly suspicious but he seems sinister here. lol LOVE that Logan is already bonding with Rogue, Sally and Nate. I can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks so much White Dove for your review. Charles knows that Rogue is a powerful mutant and would be an even more dangerous mutant in the governments hands. He cares to much for her to let her fall in the governments hands and be controlled. Logan maybe be a tough and rough man, but he does have a good heart, and softer side, that can be reached by the right person or people. I'm very happy to hear that you are enjoying the story so far. I hope you continue to read and enjoy.
I'm really liking this! Looking forward to seeing where you take it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad to hear that you are enjoying the story so far.
I'm excited for more! I wonder what chuck is gunna say to Rogue. What happened in those 8 years she was gone?
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I hope you continue too in the future.
It will be interesting once Logan puts two and two together and figures out Marie lived in that town before spending six months as a guest of the government.
Author's Response: Thanks alesia for reviewing. I don't know if I'll touch on much about Marie living in the town before the government found her, he's more interested in what happened to the kids and Marie once he found out about them being capture by the government.
Well so far Logan hasn't been out of character. This chapter was interesting. I like that Rogue is helping Nate and Sally. I love stories like this. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Hey White Dove. I'm glad that you found the chapter interesting, and I hope I do disappoint to keep you interested down the road. I fell in love with Nate and Sally as I wrote them. They are just to sweet, Rogue couldn't help but promise to take care of them. Thanks again for reviewing! :)
I am not sure why you would say Logan is OCC in this story. There are a number out there that Logan is articulate and stays at the Mansion on the regular basis. Are you think the kids would be considered Mary Sues? My thought about Mary Sues are that they are the author inserting themselves into the story. I don't see evidence of that here. You have created two OC with Nate and Sally, just because they are originals doesn't make them Mary Sues. What they do in the story and how you write them is why could make them a Mary Sue.
Author's Response: Hey alesia. I guess I'm more thinking of the Logan further into the story, so it was a more of a warning to be prepared for an OOC Logan. I hope I don't take him to far out of character though, I mean that's the whole reason we like him, right? ;) I was thinking more of Rogue when said my character was a Mary-Sue. Because she does fit the picture of a lot of Mary-Sue. Well skilled, young, attitude, sad background, and so on. I don't really see Nate or Sally as Mary-Sues. Like I said until today I didn't even know what a Mary-Sue character was. Thanks again for taking the time to read and review. I really do appreciate it.
In my view, Mary-Sue is usually an original, unrealistic character. Like a perfect female who knows elvish and swordmanship accidentally ending up in the Middle Earth in the arms of a beautiful unattached elf. I can't recall ever thinking that a canon character is a Mary-Sue, no matter how out of character.
I see nothing of that in your characters so far.... Logan feels a bit understated, but not one author's characterization is the same and you are just two chapters in so I see no reason to run away screaming.
Pity the children weren't feral, that would have been interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks Lily5 for taking the time to review. I'm glad to know so far that my characters aren't what you would consider Mary-Sues. I can appreicate your view about Logan. To be honest, I have a hard time writing his character, so I tend to go in a out of character for him. You'll probably understand more once I've posted more chapters. Neat idea about the kids, that would have been interesting. However I kind of like that they're not too. Thanks again.
Hope next time is soon! cause I am very interested to know what happens when Logan finds Rogue. lol Update soon!
Author's Response: Hey White Dove. Thanks for reviewing. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Well, I certainly got interested....
Author's Response: I'm glad to know that the first chapter was able to grab your attention. I hope you continue to read. Thanks for reviewing!