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Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2011 10:37:13 PM Title: Pool Party

Great start. His thought process in regards to the swimsuit was cute but you've got me worried as to why he would get a headache. Please continue this, it's very interesting! :)

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Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to throw some cute humor in. And I will keep posting!

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2011 6:31:41 PM Title: Pool Party

awww poor logan. So as the story moved further along it improved. Great work and can't wait for more!

Author's Response: yay my first comment! i'm glad to hear it got better as i went. Hopefully it will continue to get better as I go!! thanks for the comment!

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