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Date: 08/20/2011 11:25:07 AM Title: Chapter 67 Quiet

My heart stopped. I mean it, I think it really did. So much going on in here, I was routing for so many people, freaking out and I was so happy to see the Avenger kick in only for you to ri

Author's Response: lol, thanks...

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Date: 08/20/2011 11:23:08 AM Title: Chapter 66 Perfect

I am not surprised that Daken is finding himself wanting Rogue more than just a way to get back at his father. The first scene was awesome as usual, I was so angry at what he was doing to Rogue. I was practically yelling at my iPhone at Logan to hurry up! I hate that Storm got hurt and Kurt but Gambit soundsmpretty serious. And Mystique is still a witch. And as for the Avengers, they should get their asses in there! So exciting, seriously, what an explosion

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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Date: 08/20/2011 11:18:16 AM Title: Chapter 65 Forgive

You just keep ramping up the excitement here, the revelations were amazing, especially the reason for Rogue singing, I went back to reread the chapter where she sang Milan and the clues were all there. Honestly, this story is worth rereading just for gems like this. The whole AnnaMarie/Anina/Rogue/Marie concept is phenomenal, wonderful imagination and so different. I love that Rogue recognized she belonged with the XMen and that part with the fountains angel is perfect. Poor Rogue, finding out about her real mother was devastating. And I love how you had her reach out to everyone. I was at the edge of my seat. Love it love It

Author's Response: You caught so much, and I am ridiculously happy! My cheeks are just about close to bursting from the grin on my face! :)

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Date: 08/20/2011 11:12:12 AM Title: Chapter 64 Clarity

I don't think I have ever read a story where Rogues relationship with her foster mother was as vividly and as excellently done as this story. Nice touch with rogue recognizing her through scent and another fantastic job describing the scene. You immerse your readers in your environment, you really really do

Author's Response: :) Wow again. I feel like I should be leaving reviews for your reviews, lol! And pay you...enormous amounts of money!!!

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Date: 08/20/2011 9:24:36 AM Title: Chapter 63 Nasty

You had me so worried with this chapter. Everyone starting to catch on, Daken is still the pig he is. I really thought he was going to have his way Rogue. Interesting how his pheromones work on Rogue, but awesome how Logan was still able to break through his consciousness to protect her. I just love how you set up the scenes in your story. I really feel I am where Rogue is, from the school to Milan to Mississippi to New York City to Central Park. Thats really hard to do and you do it so well

Author's Response: Oh wow. Thank you! What a compliment, seriously, you are so very very kind to me! :)

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Date: 08/20/2011 9:13:39 AM Title: Chapter 62 Tell

Oh my oh my oh my. Yet another chapter I read a shameless amount of times. Interesting how Rogue recognizes the extreme power of the professor and instinctually is guilty for the hold she has over him. Again you manage to convey her trust of Logan, how safe he makes her feel. Nice to see her relationship with Beast be rebuilt as well. The ending was spectacular. What a way for Rogue to finally admit her love to Logan. How perfectly done

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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Date: 08/20/2011 9:07:24 AM Title: Chapter 61 Talk

I particularly remembered this chapter, I felt so bad for Logan. I love how you had Rogue reach out to him, they are best friends and this chapter reminded your readers of that. I love the interaction between Mystique and Blindspot, nice to know that Melanie feels bad. Daken is an asshat and Osborne sounds like a big problem. The end however made me sigh

Author's Response: Yes. They are best friends. Despite all the 'passion' and 'true love' and 'meant to be ' - in the end - they really are, the best of friends. Asshat..lol. I love that word. :)

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Date: 08/19/2011 10:35:35 AM Title: Chapter 60 Rush

Yet another chapter of fantasticalness. I love how powerful Rogue seems to be and how Xavier is under her control. The conversation between Logan and Emma was amazing, nice to see how Scott might have a chance of moving on with someone else. But the end had me freaking. I wanted to tear out Auroras hair myself! So much stuff happening here, you are doing such a great job bringing everything together. In the beginning of this story you touched on Itsu and the pregnancy and then you touched on the angel and now everything is a about to hit the fan. It's much better reading this story all on one shot to keep all the plots subplots in the forefront of my mind. I'm catching all the points I had forgotten about. Poor Logan. You sure aren't making it easy for any of them. Love the French - I was proud of myself for being able to follow without referring to your end notes! Until tomorrow ( and hopefully you've updated your epilogue by then pretty pretty please?)

Author's Response: My new favourite word is fantasticalness, lol! Love it! I had to throw some more fellow Canadian's into the mix and Aurora is one of my faves. My French is brutal but so far, no one's complained (although they are more than welcome to!!!) but can I tell you, once again, that your reviews are awesome? I have so many things going on in this story, true, and Itsu was always a big part of it but I didn't want too much focus on her earlier because I knew Logan and Marie had so much more to go through. Thank you for this. Epilogue is still in the works, but it should be done soon. Promise. :)

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Date: 08/19/2011 10:26:13 AM Title: Chapter 59 Slap

That scene at the beginning just made me sigh. Even in Rogue's subconscious she recognizes the connection she has with Logan and so does Logan. You also brought up how half the XMen were willing to do what the professor wanted so easily. Rogue was right to tell off Storm, Ororo was always too accepting of what Xavier wanted. Cool too how Logan is so caring of Rogue and that they are beginning to reach out to each other. So happy that Laura is going to be alright.

Author's Response: So true. That connection is always there, especially Rogue's feeling of safety when Logan's around. And yes, its true, some X-Men are a little too accepting of Xavier's decisions and commands, aren't they?

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Date: 08/19/2011 10:21:24 AM Title: Chapter 58 Dying

Exciting stuff. I like how you brought Laura back into this, it's not just Logan who is missing her. It would have affected the young girl as well and their conversation in the kitchen was heartbreaking. I had my heart in my throat when Rogue chased after Laura, I thought for sure that is was Rogue who was in danger. Wow. So many twists and turns

Author's Response: Again, thank you. I only write what my muses want me to do...usually, anyway. ;)

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Date: 08/19/2011 10:15:06 AM Title: Chapter 57 Favor

So good. I love a kickass Rogue. And I love Logan's jealousy, Stark is such a devil. It's so cool that Rogue had a past free of the XMen and yah to Captain America for sticking up for her. Funny how you had Emma Frost be Sebastian Shaws mistress, the movie came out after you posted this chapter so that was pretty cool. This chapter illustrated your amazing ability to flesh out all the players in your story. I loved it

Author's Response: Kickass Rogue is right! I know, seriously, this was written without the movie in mind, I assure you, although they did have a history in the comics. :)

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Date: 08/19/2011 10:03:08 AM Title: Chapter 56 Logan

You have a gift, you truly do. This story is so much more than just a Rogan story where they go through misunderstanding after misunderstanding, it's a real story of two people in love and trying to make things work. Rogue is realistically confused, knowing that Logan is in love with Marie and not her, at least, it's believable that she would feel that way. She doesn't remember being anyone other than Rogue and even then, only the person she was before she met up with Logan. How can he expect her to accept their relationship when she has no memory of it? And her being jealous of herself is so bang on. But Logan loves her for who she is, he knows the real Rogue. I ovenbird he apologized, but my favorite part was how he told her that he would stay in her life and that he would always find her. Brilliant scene. It's these things that keep me hooked on this story. Thank you for expressing what they are thinking/going through.

Author's Response: Wow. How can I respond to this review? I am simply stunned. Thank you for your incredible feedback, I cannot tell you what it means to be told how my story comes across and knowing that it is coming across exactly how I hope is so gratifying. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Ovenbird and all, lol (I am starting to really enjoy your typos, lol!) You. Rock. :)

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Date: 08/19/2011 9:53:01 AM Title: Chapter 55 Free

And the heartache continues. You do angst so good. I loved how Logan intended to take Rogue away to rebuild their relationship and his acknowledgement he was wrong to not tell her the truth about their relationship. But I was kind of proud of Rogue as well for not sticking around either and for deciding to leave. You shocked me with Xavier though, I didn't see that coming! Nice touch with Tony, you got him across perfectly (all I could see was Robert Downey Jr!). Good job

Author's Response: Then I did my job because Downey was exactly who I envisioned there. :)

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Date: 08/19/2011 9:46:55 AM Title: Chapter 54 Deluge

There are many parts of this story that blow me
away. And then there is this chapter. If you forced me to pick my favorite, This would have to be it. Starting from how Logan forced her to sober up, and to your description of Rogue dealing with his memories of them crashing into her mind. Incredible . You got across both their torment and the way you did it? Genius. No loved the use of the mud,'and the rain and Logan losing control. I had tears in my eyes when he refused to let go, his anguish was heartbreaking. The way you had Rogue regain control was beautiful. Just so perfect. And the ending still managed to break my heart. I think this chapter should stand out on it's own. I wish I could give you more than ten stars, this deserves so much more

Author's Response: Oh boy, how awesome are you? What a wonderful, wonderful review. A thousand stars for you actually, for writing this! :)

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Date: 08/19/2011 9:40:06 AM Title: Chapter 53 Uh-oh

Another huge chapter leading into a major point in your story. The new aspect of Logan and Rogue's relationship is cemented and Rogue is standing on her own here. I like her new confidence and Logan's difficulty in accepting it. Wonderfully described as usual. But knowing what comes next, this chapter stood out on it's own

Author's Response: :) Thanks again!

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Date: 08/19/2011 9:30:29 AM Title: Chapter 52 Marked

That was one of the hottest scenes I have ever read. Logan could be such a tease but he met his match with Rogue. Nice to see them break through the UST but of course, it had to hell at the end. I love your description of Logan when he fights his feral side and I especially love Rogue when she's strong. Nice ending. It being her mark on him makes it perfect. Your Logan and Rogue are so good.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I enjoyed writing this chapter *ahem*.

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Date: 08/19/2011 9:23:45 AM Title: Chapter 51 Stop

Ah yes, this chapter. I loved how you had Rogue acknowledge her attraction to Logan and her continuing confusion over what's happening to her. The end is one of the best cliffhangers I have ever read.

Author's Response: :) Evil, I know, but I did post the following chapter immediately. I couldn't be that cruel, lol!

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Date: 08/18/2011 2:05:57 PM Title: Chapter 50 Bob

Oh God, this was so funny! And by the way, I really enjoyed this chapters after Rogue's abduction because it showcases who she is/was before Logan found her in Alberta. This is probably who she was before Magneto came along and screwed with her head and also, who she is without Logan running through her mind. No hero worship or anything so I really enjoy their interactions. It's a more level playing field. Very nice take on things. But that BOB thing! Genius!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you. That is so true. This is who Rogue is before all that crap that Magneto put her through. Sassy, strong and in your face, someone that Logan saw hints of but never got to know. There is so much more to her than that little girl he rescued, right? Yes, very much a more level playing field, a meeting of equals. Lol about BOB. Couldn't help it. :)

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Date: 08/18/2011 2:00:52 PM Title: Chapter 49 Unbeatable

Oh my. Very very hot! And funny! I loved how Logan thought je could sneak up on Rogue and although she showed him, I like how in the end be told her not everyone is unbeatable. Cute scene with Kurt, good to see Logan all sexually frustrated and the last part of this chapter was
freaking hot! Go Rogue go !

Author's Response: I agree! Go, Rogue, GO!!

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Date: 08/18/2011 1:57:23 PM Title: Chapter 48 Broken

Another chapter that I found myself rereading so many times. Unappreciated how you took the time to really get in Rogue's head, and you managed to make your readers understand how confused she is at the women she used to be. They all seem foreign to her which adds to her growing sense of not belonging. Thank you also for the scene with Piotr, it's that ability of yours with characters that make me so involved in this story. Knut my favourite was with Gambit. Poor guy. You didn't let Rogue off here, she needed to acknowledge how she makes him feel. Good to see that her body naturally rejects anyone who isn't Logan though she doesn't know it yet.

Author's Response: Thanks! And don't worry about the typos, I kind of figured out what you were trying to say here. :)

I sometimes think I put to much emphasis on the other characters in my story, but I just can't help it and reviews like this make feel a hell of a lot better about it. They demand their "screen" time, lol. :)

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Date: 08/18/2011 1:49:09 PM Title: Chapter 47 Rogue

I forced myself to read this extra slow so I could truly enjoy your ability to shape the world you have created for this story. I loved Logan's reaction to refocusing the smell on Emma as the same on Rogue, I love how the two of them reconnected on a purely visceral level although it was hard to read Logan forcing himself to hold back. Nice to see Scott feel sorry for Logan and nice to know that Rogue finally allowed herself to cry. She is really suffering though, her identity has been ripped away from her. And again, it's Logan that comforts her. You always make me sigh!

Author's Response: Wow. What a fantastic review. You understood exactly what I was trying to get across. :) Thank you, really, thank you.

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Date: 08/18/2011 1:37:54 PM Title: Chapter 46 Nothing

Oh boy. Another chapter full of goodness. Perfect way to reintroduce her to her former life using Kurt, Daken is sounding nastier by the second and Scott just about broke my heart. Poor guy. Rogue is so lost here

Author's Response: I know. I really put Rogue through the wringer, don't I? :)

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Date: 08/18/2011 1:31:00 PM Title: Chapter 45 Brutal

The twist that Rogue had been working for SHIELD while she was singing was excellent, I love knowing she could do her own thing as a superhero without the XMen. Lots of mystery here as well, another chapter chockful of stuff. Scott's a bit of a jerk here and Gambit is a suave fellow! Fantastic writing

Author's Response: Yep. I guess you can tell I like my Rogue strong and independant. The woman has/had her own thing going on, didn't she? ;)

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Date: 08/18/2011 1:23:05 PM Title: Chapter 44 Breathe

Poor Rogue! My heart just broke for her, what a way to discover you have claws. And Scott shouldn't have been so quick to judge although finding out the woman you love used to be the enemy has to hard to handle. He stood by her in the end but it was Logan at the end that had me sighing. What a protective man! I loved this.

Author's Response: :) Again, thank you. Scott has a few issues to deal with.

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Date: 08/18/2011 1:18:48 PM Title: Chapter 43 Shaking

Overly side burned one! I cannot tell you how much I loved that line. Poor Rogue, she is so lost and confused. You managed to get across her state of mind perfectly. I love the description of everyone and how Logan is looking at her. Remy's memories were executed nicely and loved his jealousy of Logan. Another well written chapter

Author's Response: Lol, I like that line myself. Thanks again for your continued support! :)

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