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Reviewer: Crisis Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2011 1:57:23 PM Title: Chapter 48 Broken

Another chapter that I found myself rereading so many times. Unappreciated how you took the time to really get in Rogue's head, and you managed to make your readers understand how confused she is at the women she used to be. They all seem foreign to her which adds to her growing sense of not belonging. Thank you also for the scene with Piotr, it's that ability of yours with characters that make me so involved in this story. Knut my favourite was with Gambit. Poor guy. You didn't let Rogue off here, she needed to acknowledge how she makes him feel. Good to see that her body naturally rejects anyone who isn't Logan though she doesn't know it yet.

Author's Response: Thanks! And don't worry about the typos, I kind of figured out what you were trying to say here. :)

I sometimes think I put to much emphasis on the other characters in my story, but I just can't help it and reviews like this make feel a hell of a lot better about it. They demand their "screen" time, lol. :)

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