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Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2011 2:11:17 PM Title: Chapter 44 Breathe

They all heard the growl. Ha! What a perfect moment. I love this simple little statement set off in its own paragraph right there. Conveys so much with so little, giving us Wolverine's state of mind and a hint of humor as well.

Ha! Holy cow. The plot thickens even more, if that's at all possible. Our Anina has been mighty busy, hasn't she? An international spy, heh, awesome.

Oh no. Hold the freakin' phone. "t a bigger part of him was upset that Anna hadn’t confided in him. She hid so many things from him. What else didn’t he know about the woman he had wanted to spend the rest of his life with?" That sounds bad. Granted, they've both broken each others' trust before, but I feel so bad for Logan right now! :( Yay for instinctive Rogany-ness though. How sweet that she still responds to him even though she doesn't remember him.

Another exceptional chapter. I can't wait to see how you pull all of the intricate threads of this plot together.

Reviewer: Crisis Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2011 1:23:05 PM Title: Chapter 44 Breathe

Poor Rogue! My heart just broke for her, what a way to discover you have claws. And Scott shouldn't have been so quick to judge although finding out the woman you love used to be the enemy has to hard to handle. He stood by her in the end but it was Logan at the end that had me sighing. What a protective man! I loved this.

Author's Response: :) Again, thank you. Scott has a few issues to deal with.

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