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[Report This]Date: 08/16/2011 7:18:13 PM Title: Chapter 30 Hunger
I am dying here. No really, I am. You have done a great job getting across Logan and Marie's attraction to each other, I really loved the way he was so very tender with her withn Laura hurt her and how he told her to leave and how she didn't go. Man, talk about bad timing Bobby!!!?! LOL. Nice how Marie and Laura made up but its the last part of this chapter that's killed me. Logan watching Marie with Scott, and how he's suffering is AWESOME. I love it and I love this story. I should be working!! One more chapter, I have to!!
Author's Response: Logan is having a hard time of it, alright. Kind of deserves it actually. He can't just expect Anna to wait around for him, she has her own life now. A taste of his own medicine is good for the sould. Thanks for reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2011 11:09:33 AM Title: Chapter 30 Hunger
Back to back emotional chapters. The way you described Logan reaching out to Anna had my heart in my throat. I felt like strangling her, the tension between them was so thick! Why did Bobby have to show up ? I like how Laura and Anna finally connected, nice use of the horses timber through to the feral girl. The last scene broke my heart again. Anna clearly is choosing Scott and Logan is backing off instead of fighting for her the way he should. Where's that man who gets what he wants? I am so enjoying rereading this story, it's even better the second time around ( and third and fourth and fifth!).
Author's Response: Horses timber? ;) Just bugging you, don't know what you meant but your review still makes me smile! I know, Logan is leaving Anna alone because he wants to respect her choice but at the same time, even he could see that she still wants him. Damn that Bobby! :) And re-reading this behemoth of a story again? Wow. How did I ever deserve a reviewer like you?