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[Report This]Date: 08/16/2011 7:10:21 PM Title: Chapter 29 Run
Holy bananas! You pretty much stuck with X-23's story here, I really like the flashbacks and throwing in the Pinocchio story. Poor Laura, how horrible! Anna really went after Logan, eh? Pretty gruesome, talk about healing factors kicking in LOL!! I appreciate how you kept Laura in character too by how indifferent she was to everything!! Marie is feral alright, no wonder Logan got all turned on!! Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Yeppers, I just love Laura. That Pinnocchio story broke my heart too when I first read it in the comics. And yep again, Anna went crazy on Logan's ass. What a woman, lol.
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2011 10:58:33 AM Title: Chapter 29 Run
Words almost fail me here. What an actionpacked chapter! Poor Laura, how horrible. But the way Anna attacked Logan was amazing especially because of how vicious she was. The way she stopped was wonderfully done and the way you described her regaining control was so good. I really felt everything.
Author's Response: :) Thanks again. I'm not too comfortable writing action sequences and I know this chapter was pretty bloody so your comments are really appreciated.