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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2011 12:21:29 PM Title: Revelation

LOVE IT!!!

But there is something wrong with this story either there are a few NC-17 chapters missing or you haven't had time to post the NC-17 sequel ;)

more please

Author's Response: Aw, you win. Not quite NC-17, but the upper edge of 'Mature' to be sure. Check out chapter 13 :)

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 9:15:13 PM Title: Revelation

First of all, you rock for posting all twelve chapters of a completed story in one day!!! Second, this was really great! As others have already mentioned, it was very sweet and really captured their feelings and the insecurities that they have. Nice little twist on Marie's mutation too. The last chapter was especially great - Logan pursuing her but also being very nervous and vulnerable; Marie being overwhelmed but overcoming her insecurities when she realizes that he wants her, warts and all. Quite an enjoyable ride, indeed!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! They're pretty short chapters, heh. Seems cruel to drag it out 500 words at a time :P. Yeah, sometimes syrupy, ridiculously sweet stories just take over my brain. I have to write them away. And then post them for others to get sugar-high on. Why not share the fun, right?

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 9:01:37 PM Title: Revelation

yippeee! very enjoyable indeed! happy stories are oh so good. :)

Author's Response: I know right? September's story was amazing, but it just broke my freakin' heart. The fluff goblins inside of me . . . they sort of retaliated with this thing. LOL.

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 8:51:01 PM Title: Thirsty

Ahem...I think you left off a few chapters...

Seriously though? Amazing!

Author's Response: LOL. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed reading. Maybe I could tack on an NC-17 sequel . . . *slaps self* No, bad, must go back to work on Feral!

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 8:37:47 PM Title: Thirsty

short and sweet!

Author's Response: Yup! Now, back to long and complicated *goes to work on Feral*

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 8:26:10 PM Title: Revelation

More than enjoyable. It just pegged them so perfectly. Honestly, I mean that. Marie's insecurities around Logan and Logan's wrestling with who he is. That's what makes them such an intriguing couple. Great, great job.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad the characterizations struck you as genuine. That's definitely what I was going for. (Well, really, what else is there to go for in a story that has no plot, LOL.)

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 8:18:23 PM Title: Three Memories

"Marie accepting him inside her, telling him that all the others had been wrong, that he was good."

Aw. That was just such a heartwrenching line. It feels like it's at the core of who Logan is. The guy who's done horrible but wonderful things and just wants to be good.

Author's Response: Absolutely. He is so the tortured hero *swoon*.

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 8:10:35 PM Title: Practice

"Loved the contrast, big on small, dark on light, strong on gentle. Hated the calmness, the stillness of him."

Great line.

Author's Response: Isn't that just so them? They're all about contrasts and contradictions. Fun :)

Reviewer: haniccol Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 7:20:30 PM Title: Thirsty

So sweet and so glorious. Glad you posted this for all of us to enjoy.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I actually considered not posting it since it's so freakin' fluffy and plotless. But then September's story broke my heart, and I figured we all needed a healthy dose of fluff, eh? :)

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 1:50:55 PM Title: The Art of Relaxation

So good. I thought from the first chapter they might be together already but I like that they aren't. It makes this moment in time for them so sweet.

Lovely.

Author's Response: Thankee :). My first review and my first 5 stars. Quit spoiling me, Katya! (Just kidding . . . spoil me all you like, hah!)

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2011 1:48:36 PM Title: Thirsty

First review, yay! I was all prepared to be mad at you because I didn't want you to leave Feral alone, but now that I see it's a short story, I'm happy.

“Thanks eeeeevvvver so”

I can just see her saying this. :p

Author's Response: Hee. Thanks, first review! :) I didn't really expect anyone to review individual chapters. It was just kinda my way of organizing the story into neat, easy to digest snippets. Rest assured, I won't abandon Feral. This is just somethin' I've been writing on the side. Sometimes ya gotta take a step back from intense, half-feral, complicated characters that pull you in a million different directions, ya know? ;P

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