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Date: 04/22/2017 7:15:29 AM Title: The Smutty Part

No words to say how much i love this!

Reviewer: Dianora Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2016 11:20:17 AM Title: The Smutty Part

Loved this one! You managed to fool me regarding Logan's feelings until Marie absorbed his thoughts. Wonderfully done!

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2013 6:37:11 AM Title: The Smutty Part

Fantastic! Emotional and wonderfully smutty. Just great job!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2013 4:22:14 PM Title: The Smutty Part

Absolutely gorgeous story. So much heat & sweetness!

Reviewer: Mini Funk Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2013 3:58:59 PM Title: The Smutty Part

I don't know if I've reviewed this story, but I have definitely read it at least twice. Love this story; very well done. Wish there was an epilogue or a sequel or something... awesome story!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2012 8:34:13 PM Title: The Smutty Part

Just reread this to take a break from school work. Wow, it's wonderful. Love it!

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 11:05:10 PM Title: The Smutty Part

i just wanted to say, i really liked this. i pretty much read the story as you were posting it, and i kept meaning to leave a review. i loved the way you made the relationship real and not idyllic (especially their first encounter, because that's never perfectly choreographed and spectacular. you made marie into a very realistic young woman with realistic insecurities and you managed to do the same with logan while keeping him in character. well done :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate you taking the time to leave a review :). So glad you liked the story. I've been meaning to read yours and September's and Jaq's work as soon as I'm finished with 'Feral.' Yeah, first encounters are always a little awkward. But I really think that's part of what makes them so special and sweet, ya know? I do look forward to writing a sequel to this, in which they *ahem* learn to choreograph things a bit more spectacularly ;).

Reviewer: Crisis Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 9:13:16 AM Title: The Smutty Part

I agree with Serafim. Structuring the chapters the way you did really made me get to feel their emotions as things were slowly revealed. Great job

Author's Response: Thanks for the read and the review. I'm glad you liked the structuring as well. I can't say that I'm entirely happy with this story, but it was the first W/R piece I imagined, so it's got that special place, hehe :).

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2011 10:02:45 AM Title: The Smutty Part

When I saw that you added this (love the chapter title, lol!) I got all girlee and grinned like an idiot.

The grin stayed on the whole time I read this.

Hot, sexy, funny, awkward, and so damn SWEET. Exactly what it should have been and you delivered it, flawlessly. I am SO happy you joined in the fun, atmd - you are so very, very talented! :)

Author's Response: Awww shucks. Thanks :). I'm really glad to have found this site as well. The quality of the writing here is great & i'm super excited to be a part of it. I think some of the writers here must be professional authors or something 0_o. Heee. Yay for girly grinning. I was doing that as I wrote this as well. So fun to go back in time and remember all the awkwardness and insecurity that comes with growing into your sexuality. I'm really having fun with this Marie, and the movie version of Logan, who seems a bit more insecure and passionate than the movie/comic version. a lot of the inspiration for this was the scene with Jean from X3, where he's struggling to control himself and she has to tell him "It's okay, it's okay". That was just such a sweet, vulnerable moment, and a side of him that doesn't get showcased nearly enough :). Blagh sorry for typos; wrote this on my phone and too lazy to go back and fix!

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2011 12:58:57 AM Title: The Smutty Part

yippee!

Author's Response: You took the words right out of Marie's mouth LOL

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2011 5:34:38 PM Title: The Smutty Part

Next chapter, sequel... whatever just MORE!!!

Author's Response: Haha, sounds good. I'm really liking that idea as well, and am already formulating a sequel in my mind. Need to finish my other work in progress, Feral, but then expect a sequel to this :)

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