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[Report This]Date: 08/08/2011 9:54:23 AM Title: Thirsty
Aw...I'm so glad I was obnoxious in pushing you to write Chapter 13. It was just awesome. I do have a very...er, vivid (i.e. "perverted") imagination, but I would not have been able to imagine such a wonderful scene that fit the characters you established so perfectly. It was sweet, and sexy, and unexpected, and as you say, so very real. A truly great ending to a great story.
Author's Response: Thanks :). You have no idea how many times during the course of this chapter I started to go off in a decidedly NC-17 direction . . . but then . . . thinking about the characters, and Logan knowing how inexperienced she is, I just didn't think he would let things go *quite* that far on their first night, y'know? I wanted it to be good, but also realistic and a little awkward. And there's certainly room for a sequel now, AFTER Feral, lol.
[Report This]Date: 08/06/2011 9:11:05 AM Title: Thirsty
I just love the easy flow here. With a few lines of dialogue, a tease here and there and voila - there is Logan and Marie.
:) Now, I shall go onwards... I saw that you were uploading and FORCED myself to wait until you were done and YES, I will reviewing each chapter....
Author's Response: You freakin' rock. Seriously. I looked at all these reviews and . . . well, I didn't do a happy dance . . . but I did literally have to stand up and move around from excitement. (Okay, I'm lying, I did a happy dance. Don't tell anyone.)
[Report This]Date: 08/05/2011 5:26:29 PM Title: Thirsty
Wow, I loved that story! You killed me with the short chapters on my slooooow cell phone, but it was worth all the waiting. ;-) Such a great characterization of them both, very sexy, nice revelations all around (Marie's insecurity and fear of growing up, Logan's yearnings)...the list of great stuff is endless. I really love playful, ebullient Logan, it's something you so rarely see and so charming. Laughed out loud at "You're black and white and red all over!" But I agree with other reviewers. I think you are missing a lucky Chapter 13. Don't wanna waste a Mature rating, do ya? ;-)
Author's Response: Ha! Sorry, lame 3G, I feel ya. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review. After your suggestion and a couple of others, I went on and added that lucky chapter. Ended up being as long as the whole rest of the story, heh.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2011 8:51:01 PM Title: Thirsty
Ahem...I think you left off a few chapters...
Seriously though? Amazing!
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed reading. Maybe I could tack on an NC-17 sequel . . . *slaps self* No, bad, must go back to work on Feral!
Date: 08/04/2011 8:37:47 PM Title: Thirsty
short and sweet!
Author's Response: Yup! Now, back to long and complicated *goes to work on Feral*
Date: 08/04/2011 7:20:30 PM Title: Thirsty
So sweet and so glorious. Glad you posted this for all of us to enjoy.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I actually considered not posting it since it's so freakin' fluffy and plotless. But then September's story broke my heart, and I figured we all needed a healthy dose of fluff, eh? :)
Date: 08/04/2011 1:48:36 PM Title: Thirsty
First review, yay! I was all prepared to be mad at you because I didn't want you to leave Feral alone, but now that I see it's a short story, I'm happy.
“Thanks eeeeevvvver so”
I can just see her saying this. :p
Author's Response: Hee. Thanks, first review! :) I didn't really expect anyone to review individual chapters. It was just kinda my way of organizing the story into neat, easy to digest snippets. Rest assured, I won't abandon Feral. This is just somethin' I've been writing on the side. Sometimes ya gotta take a step back from intense, half-feral, complicated characters that pull you in a million different directions, ya know? ;P