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Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2011 7:58:26 AM Title: The Confrontation

The trouble with reading a whole bunch of chapters at once is that pesky next button. And you with the suspense, of course. (I feel I can pause before the smut ... anticipation, you know ;) You balanced the suspenseful elements of this perfectly with Marie's emotional battle to rediscover herself and her own strength; unputdownable. Wonderful work!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2011 7:28:18 AM Title: The Prize

Ouch. Talk about a passion killer! So glad this story is still wonderful after my "can't read Rogan" hiatus!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2011 10:40:24 AM Title: The Mark

That loud smacking sound is my palm hitting my forehead...Fear! Of course! Now why didn't I...? Oh, hell, it doesn't matter...I'm just glad you figured it out and oh, what a glorious way to prove the point. I've always said one of the reasons he loves her is because she accepts him -- both of him -- completely and you couldn't have illustrated that better. OUTSTANDING! --Wendie

Author's Response: Tee hee, I'm sure I'm not the first one to envision her mutation that way, but it was a nice convenient excuse to have touchable smut, which is much easier to write than barrier smut. ;-) I'm so glad you liked her acceptance of him as well. The more I write about these two the more the lovely symmetry of them strikes me. Glad I was able to convey that.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2011 10:19:21 AM Title: The Mirror

So she has control...maybe she's always had it, but just assumed she didn't, figuring better safe than sorry? Leave it to Logan to show her she's more than she imagined she could be.

And that whole dominating thing...no complaints here!

--Wendie

Author's Response: I've already answered your first question in the next chapter...hope you liked the explanation! And another vote for Masterful!Logan. Yay!

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2011 3:29:30 AM Title: The Mark

Smokin'! Mikey likes it. Where by "Mikey" I mean "I." Such a lovely blend of sweet and sexy.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2011 12:47:51 AM Title: The Mark

If the previous chapter was smoking hot, then this one is off the charts nuclear!

I don't know how you do it, but this is the perfect blend of sexy and sweet. And I think for Logan and Marie, this is the epitome of a win-win situation. ;)

P.S. You owe me a new phone because after the last two chapters it is now a smoking pile of ash.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. And that the sweet came through along with the sexy, that's what I was going for. Sorry about the phone...stick in in the freezer and maybe it'll recover. ;-)

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2011 12:37:55 AM Title: The Mirror

“Hush.” His voice was a low rumble against her ear. “I’m about to start talkin’ about my feelings and shit and it don’t happen often, so get comfortable.”

I'm glad that you started this chapter with my favorite line from the previous one. It was so good, it needed to be repeated!

This chapter is guaranteed to melt anyone's heart - first from the sweet and romantic confession to the smoking hot Logan-style "shock therapy".

If I may be so bold, I don't think anyone's going to complain about Logan being "dominating". I'm just saying. :-D

Author's Response: Ha, I particularly liked that line too. I'm so glad you liked the chapter. And I agree, a "Masterful!Logan" is rarely going to be the subject of complaints, but you never know!

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2011 7:53:45 AM Title: The Mark

Glorious smut! I love thee!

Author's Response: :-D Yay! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: lily5 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2011 2:57:43 AM Title: The Mark

Review....
Awesome? Totally awesome? I so loved her acceptance of his feral side.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked the feral acceptance part. It came out a little weirder than I expected, but I liked it in the end. :-)

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2011 12:22:09 AM Title: The Mark

Gah! That was hot and sweet and tender and just pure poetry. The image of her realizing that she could control her power and then having Logan right there to 'experiment' on...just delicious.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, if anyone needs motivation to work on control, having semi-naked Logan right there seems like a pretty good incentive. ;-)

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 10:38:05 PM Title: The Mark

enjoyable as always. the chapter runs too beautifully, there's nothing extraneous. nicely done :-)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and didn't find it too wordy. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 10:31:51 PM Title: The Mark

Okay so maybe I shouldn't be the one to say I don't think this is too long since I can't seem to write a chapter under 5k, but I loved this.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. By the way, when is your next chapter coming up? ;-)

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 9:25:48 PM Title: The Mark

Such a great chapter. I loved it! Keep it up!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for your review.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 8:38:34 PM Title: The Mark

Whew! that was HOT. This story is SO good. That hotness is a huge bonus but I just love the story you are telling with this one. can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. I'll get working on more! :-D

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2011 2:19:04 AM Title: The Mirror

So good I had to read it again... And again... And again.... Whew, I need a cigarette and I don't smoke! LOL. Maybe I will just go get my Wolvie Muse a cigar... Great job!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much. I'm so glad you liked it. Enjoy the smoke, Wolvie Muse!

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 8:52:52 PM Title: The Mirror

You are the cliffhanger queen! Great chapter and thanks for the super quick update : )

Author's Response: Sorry, the smut was getting lengthy, so I had to cut it off somewhere. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 7:52:42 PM Title: The Deal

Ok, I'm speechless.

Seriously? Really?

I promise to wait on the cold shower until the next update. If I can't you'll find me out dancing in the rain tonight. That was so hot... Can't hardly wait for more!

Author's Response: Hope you found the next update...satisfying. ;-) So glad you liked it...thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 7:51:17 PM Title: The Mirror

Best. Cliffhanger. Ever.

I'm seriously not even mad at you anymore for always ending with cliffhangers, because this one was just perfect.

In fact, the whole chapter was um... very... with the.... and the.... anyways, what I'm trying to say is "YUM!"

So, I know I say this about every chapter, but best chapter so far, for sure. This story just gets better and better =D.

Author's Response: I'll definitely take "Yum". Thanks so much for your review, I'm so glad you're liking the story! Now get back to work on Feral, pretty please?

Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 7:32:48 PM Title: The Confrontation

You're right, it has been slow the past month. Dunno about everyone else, but it's the start-of-semester craziness for me. Must be a lot of teachers/students on this site, heh.

Aha! A pill bottle. I was wondering what kind of container she might put Shaw in. That makes perfect sense. Her interaction with him was good. She's definitely not someone to be trifled with. Go Rogue ;P. But my favorite scene has to be her waking up, the needle poised at the ready. GAH! I could just feel the tension in that moment.

Logan’s gaze sharpened on hers, suddenly intent. “Yeah, Scott.” He paused for a moment, still studying her. “Her husband,” he added.

Okay I lied. ^^^^ That is my favorite moment. Grinning from ear to ear now. Silly Marie. Glad Logan cleared that up for her!

AHH okay I lied again. The last line is, like, my favorite line ever of all time. Guh. Awesome chapter. Best chapter so far. Yay.

Author's Response: Hey there! Hope your semester has calmed down a little. I'm glad the tension of the "Is-it-Shaw-or-is-it-Rogue?" moment worked. Yeah, isn't it nice how in a few words Logan can clear up all this Jean nonsense? I'm glad you liked that last line too. Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 7:15:42 PM Title: The Contingency

So excited to finally have time to catch up on this story tonight (okay, okay, so I don't have time, but screw you, data analysis, fic is more important). THREE new chapters!! Yippee =D.

I like Logan's shower thoughts. Well, and just him in the shower in general. But the thoughts are good, too. Very Logany.

Ooh Leech! Nice twist. I totally didn't see that one coming, and the way this chapter unfolded--bam, bam, bam--the pacing was perfect, and I don't know how you managed it without any exposition. Great writing. I can't wait to see what happens next. Which is okay. 'Cause I don't have to. *runs off to the next chapter*

Author's Response: Data analysis can definitely wait! Yes, shower + Logan is never a bad idea, is it? And I love the "Logany" adjective. Much better than "Loganesque." I'm glad you liked the Leech twist too, at times it feels like I'm throwing everything but the kitchen sink into this fic, but I do have a master plan. Thanks again for taking the time to review each chapter!

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 6:33:08 PM Title: The Mirror

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! How could you just leave it there! We must know what happen next's, please update soon

Author's Response: Ha, on the bright side, this is another one I broke up because it was getting too long, so I should be quick with the next update too. Keep reviewing, and I'll keep working! :-D

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 6:05:17 PM Title: The Mirror

*fans self* Hell yeah!

Er, that is, good show, old girl. ;) Like a dominating Logan is ever a bad thing? Love it. Now get to the hot Rogan sex part, woman!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Yeah, I have to say, I happen to like an...um..."masterful" Logan myself at times, but this fic has already skewed towards a weaker Marie than I usually write, and I didn't want her to be all passive. She takes control in the next chapter, though, so I consider it fair play. And don't worry, hot Rogan sex is next on the agenda -- I figured it would just be all the hotter if I didn't have to keep throwing up barriers between their skin. I have done one sex scene with Untouchable!Marie but it is quite logistically challenging, and since I want this Marie to have control eventually I figured I'd just go ahead and get it out of the way so we can get on to the hot sexin'. ;-)

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2011 5:38:17 PM Title: The Confrontation

Not that I wouldn't have LOVED to have seen the exact moment, known the exact words Marie used to outsmart Shaw, getting him to give up Jean's whereabouts and then stuffing him in that bottle, but I am glad you didn't drag it out overmuch. It was more than enough, really, to have her tell him 'Before today you haven't even met me...' and than later to introduce herself sans gloves...Delicious. And Logan's last line is going down as one of my all time favorite Logan lines...OUTSTANDING! --Wendie

Author's Response: Yeah, honestly it became so Inception-y to try to figure out how Inner!Marie would actually contain Inner!Shaw that the more detail I added the less convincing it got. In the end, it's almost like she uses her mutation on him, but since they're both basically avatars in her head, what does that really mean? I choose to believe she just kind of contained him through sheer force of will. And I'm glad you liked Logan's last line -- I love "sensitive" Logan too!

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2011 6:28:17 PM Title: The Confrontation

I'll review yours, if you review mine. :)

I like how you sent Logan into a total panic mode when she put herself into a comatose state. And I loved how he went after her and she was under the false impression that he wanted Jean for himself. I can hardly wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Yeah, Logan panicking is such a rare thing that I think it really communicates the depth of his feelings in a way that he would never otherwise acknowledge.

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2011 3:53:42 PM Title: The Confrontation

I love this story so much, it's nice to see an update in my inbox first thing in the morning. I really don't want it to end, but I must know what happen nexts. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Aw, so sweet to hear! Yeah, I think we are headed toward the end, but I'm not entirely sure how many chapters are left, especially since the smut always goes on longer than I think it will. ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing!

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