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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2011 5:36:42 AM Title: The Reveal

“Wolverine. I see you’ve met my wife.”

Hmm my reaction to this was 'eww' don't really know why.


...the man she had seen last night, standing naked at his window.

That's a very nice image ;)

Author's Response: I think an "Ewww!" is entirely called for here! Sebastian Shaw is creepy as hell. :-D Whereas Naked!Logan is...not. ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2011 12:15:24 AM Title: The Reveal

Holy plot twist! I didn't see THAT coming ... last time I take you for granted ;) So glad you succumbed to posting early; feel free to do it again :D

Author's Response: Glad I managed to surprise you. As you can see, I succumbed again. ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2011 12:12:00 AM Title: The Reveal

I'm glad that you couldn't wait to post this because I couldn't wait to read it! Seriously.

I was NOT expecting the wife twist--well done! And of course, I love the fact that they are so attracted to each other and trying desperately to deny it and avoid the "trouble" that it could cause them. I'm very intrigued to find out what's going on with Marie and how she got mixed up with SS too. I'm totally digging the Logan undercover angle as well. Very interesting setup to say the least.

As always, I'm ecstatic that you are writing another story. I get a huge goofy grin on my face when I get an email alert because I know that it's going to be something special to read.

BTW, I got the email alert today when I was at work and I was like, "Yeah, I'm reading this NOW! Everything else can wait." Thank God for smart phones!

Please keep the chapters coming! Full speed ahead and no more holding out. ;)

Author's Response: Aw, you are the absolute sweetest. I smile every time I see your name because I know your review is going to be so awesome. I'm glad you liked the plot twist, and that you like Undercover!Wolverine. It's so hard for me to remember to call him Wolverine instead of Logan, and to call Rogue Rogue instead of Marie! There will be more hints about how Rogue ended up with Sebastian. I'm having trouble figuring out how to dole out the information slowly instead of spilling it all at once. Did I mention I'm not great about holding out? Anyway, such a compliment to know you pulled out the smartphone for me. I've definitely been there!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2011 9:40:20 PM Title: The Reveal

As twists go, that was a doozy! Wouldn't it be interesting if Rogue turned out to be not a distraction from his mission, but the mission itself? Can't wait for more of this delicious story... --Wendie

Author's Response: Glad you liked the twist...thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2011 7:48:10 PM Title: The Deal

Great story! I posted before but deleted it because I used the wrong punctuation and it sounded stupid, lol! I cant wait for more as always : )

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing -- twice, no less!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2011 6:37:28 PM Title: The Reveal

No crap, trouble! Boy, this has the T-word written all over it backwards, forwards and diagonally. Yippee! :) Thanks for the intriguing plot twist. And don't feel you have to hold out on us! I am always very grateful for swift-posters, having little self-discipline and an over abundance of curiosity myself.

Author's Response: Yep, I think there will be complications. And see, you proved my theory, though, by only reviewing the second chapter! You get more reviews if you hold out between updates, but I just don't have the fortitude. ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing, and I'm happy to satisfy your curiosity as quickly as I can!

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2011 4:33:49 PM Title: The Reveal

Wow! What a twist...I sure dodnt see that one coming! I am hooked for sure : )

Author's Response: Dun dun DUH! :-D

Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2011 2:35:52 PM Title: The Reveal

Ooh. I loved it. The chemistry between those two is palpable already. And the plot thickens--Shaw's wife?! This promises to be all kinds of interesting. I like the way you write; you really pull your readers into the characters' heads and take us along on the experience with them. You've got me on pins and needles; can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad the chemistry is working for you.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2011 12:56:40 PM Title: The Reveal

You have my attention with this one. I am intrigued. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: So glad you're on board!

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2011 11:17:14 AM Title: The Deal

My only complaint, as an equestrian is the over use of stallions in stories...but thats beside the point and just me being anal...

Loved it, and Im hoping you will once again not be able to keep us waiting :)

Author's Response: Ha...I almost put in a disclaimer that I know bugger-all about horseback riding except what I've picked up from Dick Francis novels, and of course they don't tend to "fix" racehorses. Would it be more likely to be a gelding, then, or would she be riding the mare? I'm happy to change it. Please also let me know if I got any of the other lingo wrong. I Googled for a long time trying to figure out if there was a different word for those little half-doors on the stalls. ;-)

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2011 12:27:26 AM Title: The Deal

Okay, I admit it. I squealed in a rather embarassing, fangirl-esque way when I saw that you had posted a new story.

And it hasn't disappointed. I really love the intro. Can't wait to see where you go from here

Author's Response: There's no embarrassment in a fangirl squeal! I'm so glad that you like my stories, and that this one caught you. I promise it gets more Rogan-y from here on out. ;-)

Reviewer: atmd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2011 9:23:30 PM Title: The Deal

Yayeeeee. I still haven't read most of your already-completed stories, but this was an interesting start and I definitely look forward to following along as you write it. And I'll get around to those other stories too, someday, lol. Nice to see the First Class mutants brought in. I look forward to seeing what you do with them.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I have no problems with you not reading my prior stuff if that's what keeps you updating "Feral." It is an awesome fic, and I do a little happy dance every time there's a new chapter. I'm glad you like the mash-up of First Class mutants with the X-Men from the other movies. There's some issues with age there, but what the heck. If Mystique turns out to be smokin' hot at 60, everyone has an excuse for not aging, right? Besides, AU covers all manner of sins.

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 9:27:24 PM Title: The Deal

hey, consider me in. just interested in the stakes here... loved shaw in x-men first class BYW, can't wait to see what you do to him... hobbits away, hey!

Author's Response: Yay! Glad you're on board. Yeah, Shaw is a good villain, isn't he? Plus I'm too lazy to make up my own villains, and I've already run through both Stryker and Magneto...

Reviewer: haniccol Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 9:07:11 PM Title: The Deal

Every time I see something from you on the most recent page I do a little happy dance because I know I'm in for an awesome ride. This looks very promising and I can't wait to find out what happens.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! I was so excited to see your fic up and running again. :-D I can promise Rogan interaction in the next few chapters at least...

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 7:46:30 PM Title: The Deal

Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 6:05:45 PM Title: The Deal

I can only think of one person who could smell that way...

more please

Author's Response: You may be right. ;-) You'll definitely get more soon (maybe tomorrow or the next day), I went on a streak today and I think I've finished up chapter three. I keep trying to follow Sahara's advice to stay a few chapters ahead and it definitely makes for a better story if I can go back and add clues for what's to come into previous chapters before they go live, but I just can't hold out. I want to know what you guys think. :-D

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 2:56:47 AM Title: The Deal

Ohhhh. Lovely, gripping start, slinking into an oh-so-promising finish to the chapter. Have a horrible feeling I know what SS is collecting mutants for :( Poor Rogue. Will be waiting for the next with bated breath ... great to see your name up there again.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the start! It felt a little clunky when I was writing it. I'll be interested to see if your theory about what Sebastian is up to turns out to be the same as mine. :-D

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 2:45:31 AM Title: The Deal

Exceptionally well-written. Riveting, in fact. I'm in... --Wendie

Author's Response: Thanks so much! So glad to have you on board!

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 1:49:26 AM Title: The Deal

***jumps in the air and clicks heels together***

Another great story in the works, I see! Giddy, trembly, all sort of good stuff happening on my end, and you - as always - do not disappoint!

sunshine and rain and sweet grass

Well, well, well, wonder who THAT could be? :)

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much for reviewing. Yeah, I actually tried to think of a new scent for Marie...kept adding and deleting, and then finally, I was like, "Screw it, it's midnight, she's going to smell the same as in the last few stories." ;-)

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 1:33:09 AM Title: The Deal

Oh, very nice. Intrigued so far. :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it! Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 12:13:34 AM Title: The Deal

Jean missing, Logan undercover surrounded by dangerous enemies and an elusive, mysterious Marie? Count me in!

Oh, and a lot of set-up is good. ;)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it! Usually I write fics because the first chapter kind of gets in my head and won't leave until I write it down. This one is a little different, it's events in the middle chapters that caught my attention, and then I had to back up and set it all up. So, I'm really glad to hear that this chapter worked, it didn't come so easy. ;-)

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 12:12:51 AM Title: The Deal

Ooh, hey, I've been wondering when or if someone was going to bring in First Class. This is very intriguing and I'm eager to see more. It's always great to see your name pop up on the Most Recent page; I know it means something good is coming.

BTW, I noticed one tiny mistake:

“But why you?,” Hank asked.

That comma shouldn't be there. :)

Author's Response: LOL, you would not believe how many times I put that comma in, and then took it out again, and then put it in again, and then took it out again. ;-) I should have just looked up the rule already. What can I say, it was midnight. Thanks for the correction! Yeah, I'm going a little AU with First Class, pretty much just moving all those good villains into the present timeline. It would work for Shaw, but I wanted Emma too and didn't have the time and energy to make up new henchmen, so there ya go. ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing!

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