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[Report This]Date: 09/14/2011 4:47:55 PM Title: The Cage
Great story! I was on the edge of my seat in this chapter : )
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09/14/2011 1:20:29 PM Title: The Cage
Ohhh goodness. I'm loving this verrrryyyy much. I was freaking out a bit when Logan was caged up but so glad you found a way for Rogue to come to the rescue. Just thought I'd let you know that your stories are ah-ma-zing!haha and I'm sorry for not reviewing (I just started reading your stories bout a week ago) but now I will for sure as much as possible. Especially if it get to read this good stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you liked it -- yeah, it was pretty lucky Azazel was such a slime. ;-) Thanks again for reviewing!
Date: 09/13/2011 10:25:51 PM Title: The Cage
First quick piece of constructive feedback - I didn't get that Marie had teleported them until I went back and read it again. It may just be me but it took me a minute to determine that she had teleported them and not changed the cage into wood.
The last paragraph rocks! I could just feel the rage directed at the Professor. I am glad they got away. The moments when Logan made Marie repeat what he told her were intense. I could see the entire scene play out in my head.
I am really really enjoying this story.
Author's Response: You know, I was SO worried about that I made my husband read it over to tell me if he understood what happened. He said he did, but I can see where it might be confusing, especially if you're not reading the last few chapters all at once like he was. I kind of screwed myself by saying earlier that when Logan gets teleported he doesn't hear the "thwucking" sound, because that would probably have been a bigger clue. I tried to use the same language (the "dizzying sensation of nothingness") and the smoke, but I know it was pretty sudden, and yet I didn't think I could have Rogue say, "Hang on, I'm gonna give teleportation a shot." I might move the line about being in the stables up a bit, let me know if that makes it more clear what happened. I'm glad you liked that part with the tags and how intense Logan is there, it seemed very Logan-ish to me. I'm really glad to give him a chance to show his stuff instead of just being stuck because of Shaw's abilities. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 09/13/2011 10:18:57 PM Title: The Cage
Absolutely rockin' update? That is an understatement! You did not disappoint. This was awesome! You set up a great trap for Logan and a perfect (and unexpected) escape for Logan and Marie. I loved seeing Marie pull a fast one on Shaw & Co. Damn straight, Marie, you are nobody's fool or victim! Very cool! And I love seeing Logan take charge, kicking butt and taking names. Great ending line too:
“You and I need to talk. What the fuck is a Phoenix, and what does it have to do with Jean?”
This is what you come up with when you are drinking mojitos?! Is it wrong for me to condone drinking when it produces such great writing? Well if it's wrong then I don't want to be right! ;)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for your wonderful reviews...and please forgive my pathetic author's note from last chapter. There may have been some mojito involved there too. ;-) I'm glad you liked the chapter. Yes, I think Marie will be showing more and more strength as things come up. And I know, *finally* Wolverine gets to kick some ass! Poor guy has been so hemmed in by Shaw's power. He was way overdue some bloodshed. Thanks again for your reviews, they are always so much fun. Just for you, I'll try to post the next chapter extra early -- hopefully Friday. Cheers!
Date: 09/13/2011 9:49:43 PM Title: The Creation
Ah, you are sneaky! Making it seem like Marie and Logan were going to have a huge fight to start this chapter. I'm glad it didn't go that way. I like how you have both of them thinking things through and talking it out. No hysterics or name calling, just two people who care about each other working things out. I love how you have developed their relationship and how strong their bond is.
I enjoyed the banter between them too.
“So you’d be sad if Shaw turned me to dust?”
“Well, don’t get a swelled head over it.”
“You know I’m feral, right?”
“The constant growling tipped me off a bit.”
“Smartass."
LOL! Loved it!
I figured they would have their work cut out for them regarding their escape but I was unprepared for Azazel teleporting Logan away and leaving Marie to fend for herself. Nicely done! Well, Marie get the hell out of dodge ASAP, girl! And please tell me that Logan is finally going to put a hurtin' on Azazel too!
Author's Response: :-D Yeah, that was kind of mean of me. But you have to admit, that would be an inopportune thought to catch at just that moment. ;-) I'm glad you liked the way they talk things out. One of the sweetest things my husband ever said to me was when we were first dating, he complimented me on the fact that if I were angry or upset I would actually just talk to him about it instead of sulking or yelling or whatever. I think it makes the characters a lot more likeable when they are able to try hard to work things out. I'm glad you liked the banter too. At times it seemed a little incongruent to have them joking around, but I really want Logan to fall in love with *Marie*, not just a generic damsel in distress. So I wanted to show some of her personality rather than her just being a sad sack all the time, which she is totally justified in being because of the horrible, horrible, circumstances she is in.
Date: 09/13/2011 9:14:36 PM Title: The Cage
as always exciting. know what you mean about reviews being thin on the ground, so here's yours: Bravo!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! And now I am embarrassed, because I owe you a bunch of reviews for "Stray." I wasn't sure that you actually checked them...it sounds stupid when I say it, but I reviewed every chapter of some of your other stories and you never responded or anything so I thought maybe you didn't check. I'll get right on it!
[Report This]Date: 09/13/2011 9:01:45 PM Title: The Cage
A nail biter. Seriously. I felt Logan's rage as he sat in that cage watching everything around him. And, hot damn, I'd forgotten that she'd absorbed Azazel. Brilliant.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad you liked it! I was worried I was "broadcasting" too much when Azazel said the part about teleporting being the only way in and out. I'm glad I still managed to surprise you.
[Report This]Date: 09/13/2011 8:56:29 PM Title: The Creation
I didn't review here? I should have reviewed here. Yee haw! I knew they couldn't get away that scott free. It's comin' down now!
Author's Response: Aw, reviewing anywhere is awesome. Thanks so much! Yeah, things really heat up from here. :-D
Date: 09/12/2011 10:21:11 PM Title: The Creation
Fantastic story =)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. You are ridiculously sweet. Love the name! ;-)
Date: 09/12/2011 9:28:57 PM Title: The Creation
You're getting awesome at teaser endings! It makes me very anxious to read the next part! Keep up the great work =)
Author's Response: Aw, a pity review. ;-) I'll take it! Thanks so much...you're a sweetheart!
Date: 09/11/2011 9:34:23 PM Title: The Creation
AAAAHHHH! Now that's just mean. lol
I think they might find Jean alive (which would make me happy). But how are they going to get out of this crazy mess???
Author's Response: Sorry for the mean update! I'll try to post the next few chapters quickly to make up for the cliffhangers. :-D
Date: 09/11/2011 9:30:36 PM Title: The Prize
Oh snap.
Really beautiful (and hot!) chapter. Uh-oh, Rogue's not gonna be happy with him leaving her to the Blackbird...
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. You might be surprised by Rogue's reaction. ;-)
Date: 09/11/2011 6:45:45 AM Title: The Creation
Oh, hell and damnation! I knew they wouldn't get away easily, but this is a lovely cliffie mess you've gotten them into...More, more, more! --Wendie
Author's Response: :-D Yeah, nothing ever goes their way, does it? Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 09/10/2011 1:21:09 PM Title: The Creation
Time for some Xmen to the rescue!! Chuck do that mind readin' thing and come a runnin' :)
I really like how you had them talk it out, these two are so in tune with each other but not solely in a physical way but with the flow of their emotions as well. Wonderful
Author's Response: Yeah, they are in a spot, huh? Thanks for the compliment about them talking it out. I try to avoid simple misunderstandings and overreactions when it's plausible. I think it's easier for characters to be likable when they are really trying hard to reach an understanding rather than flying off the handle. There will still be misunderstandings, of course, though! Thanks so much for your review.
Date: 09/08/2011 2:43:24 AM Title: The Prize
Busted!...and at the worst possible moment. You really know how to throw the tension back into the afterglow, don't ya? Oh, and by the way, your transition from drama to smut was flawless. I'll wait as long as it takes for updates this amazing... --Wendie
Author's Response: Yeah, that was kind of mean, wasn't it? I'm so glad you liked the transition. Thanks so much for your words of encouragement! The updates will definitely be coming faster now, I really got stuck on the smutty chapter but things are moving along well now.
Date: 09/07/2011 10:23:47 PM Title: The Prize
The transition worked perfectly. But no more allowing your hubby to hog the laptop! Rogan business takes precedence over everything else! ;)
Seriously, I was so happy to see that you updated. I really love this story. Keep the chapters coming! Please!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you thought the transition worked! Luckily I wrested the laptop away this weekend and got a chapter or two ahead. ;-) Thanks again for your reviews, and encouraging words!
[Report This]Date: 09/07/2011 6:47:51 PM Title: The Prize
:-O How could he? xXx
Author's Response: :-D
[Report This]Date: 09/07/2011 4:56:09 PM Title: The Prize
Damn it!!
It really sucks that your so good at building up a cliff-hanger.
Author's Response: Thanks! And thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 09/07/2011 1:12:02 AM Title: The Prize
Oops, Logan you could be in serious trouble my friend.
I think you did great with going from dramatic to smut and straight back with a bang! I am looking forward to watching her put him in his place. Why would he leave her anyway? Won't Shaw know what he did? Won't Emma?
Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't find the drama-smut-drama transition too jarring. ;-) As for your questions, they'll probably get answered in the first paragraph of the next chapter, but I'll give you a little preview. ;-) He can't leave without finding out Jean's location, because he knows he'll never get back in. He would tell Shaw that Rogue just knocked him out with her skin. And Emma can't read his mind.
[Report This]Date: 09/07/2011 12:25:57 AM Title: The Prize
Oooh. Yay! This chapter was definitely worth the wait. Not only do I finally have some sense of what's going on with Jean, but there was smut--and sorry, interesting plot point, but I'm afraid the smut wins in the 'my favorite part of the chapter' competition ;).
I liked the image of Rogue tracing an 'M' on the window. Very nicely done. And of course, the last few lines were just--unfh. Can't wait to see how that plays out.
Author's Response: So glad you thought it was worth the (overly-long) wait. I'm glad you liked the smut too -- I love reading stories with smut and I always want to throw it in there, but while I'm writing it I'm always like, "This is so hokey, this is such a cliche, people are going to be laughing out loud at this..." :-) I'm glad you liked the "M"...that was one of the "scenes" I first had in mind when I was formulating the story. I'll get to work on the next chapter!
Date: 09/07/2011 12:16:43 AM Title: The Prize
Love what you've got so far. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing -- on both sites! You are awesome.
Date: 09/06/2011 11:24:48 PM Title: The Prize
I sense bad things are coming. I think we're about to see a reappeance of strong independent Rogue and none too soon.
Author's Response: Ha, all I can think of is Seinfeld -- "You're killing Independent George!" But you're right, it is a slow progression toward Strong!Rogue but it will continue. So far she's really been battered around by others, but she's going to start making some pretty bold decisions in the next little bit. Thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2011 10:43:56 PM Title: The Prize
Uh oh.
Jeez, I can't wait to see how Logan talks his way out of that one. D'oh!
It's great to see Rogue coming into her own. I'm looking forward to seeing her take Shaw down a peg or fifty.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the hints of stronger Rogue. It'll be a slow progression, but hopefully a satisfying one. And trust me, Shaw will get the smackdown he so richly deserves.
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2011 10:39:58 PM Title: The Prize
Well, that isn't the way to end a session like that! Poor Logan, what a time for their first fight! Great chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm quite the buzzkill. ;-) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08/30/2011 11:06:32 PM Title: The Game
Whoa, intense!!!!
I love your stories. You have a wonderful talent for spinning tales...and I certainly can't wait to see the next part of this one!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much. Hope the next chapter met with your satisfaction. ;-)