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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 6:18:33 AM Title: The Mark

Is it hot in here or what?! *fans self*

Author's Response: :-D So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2011 10:46:37 PM Title: The Mark

Aw, I love how they each understand the other more than anyone else could. And they're so complimentary to one another. That's why I so love them as a pair. I really do. And you capture it all wonderfully. Thank you!

Author's Response: Yeah, they really do complement each other in a really cool way. And this Rogue throughout the story was "weaker" than I usually write her, but I think she is strong in less ass-kicking ways, including her strength of character to accept Logan the way he is and to understand his fears and insecurities.

Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2011 9:32:15 AM Title: The Mark

Wow, that was definitely better than Snape/Hermione BDSM (but uh, to each their own =D). I almost accidentally skipped this chapter--and that woulda been a cryin' shame, because it's awesome. Hot and sweet in equal measure. The acceptance they give each other--Logan of Marie's skin and Marie of his rougher side, was really sweet and a nice parallel.

“Sorry, sugar.” He growled softly again at the sound of her honeyed drawl, his hands restlessly clenching fistfuls of the blankets. She relented, trailing her hand back up and pressing on the firm ridge at the front of his pants, feeling his body hard and eager under her hand. He groaned, pushing up into her hand even harder, the leather almost as warm as she knew his skin would be.

“Marie...” Another plea, growled like a command, as she traced the shape of him and then scraped her fingernails down the rigid length under the taut leather. “Christ, Marie, yes...” The words dissolved into gruff, inarticulate sounds of wanting as she stroked him lazily, her mind spinning with all the things she wanted to do to him.

And. Uh. Did I mention it was hot?

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I've been struck before by the parallel between Logan's hatred of his feral side and Marie's hatred of her skin, so it was fun to try to squish it all into one (or two) chapters. As for hot, let the record show I re-read selected chapters of Feral in order to get my smut mojo on, so...keep at it!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2011 8:14:05 AM Title: The Mark

I think you rob yourself by describing that as "smut". It's as much about emotion as it is sex; about self perception and self loathing and that road towards acceptance. And written with such beauty and understanding of the characters and their needs. Happy, happy sigh.

Author's Response: Aw, what a sweet review. I'm so glad that the themes of self-perception and self-loathing came across. You know me, I love to wallow in the insecurities of these characters. Thanks so much for your lovely review.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2011 10:40:24 AM Title: The Mark

That loud smacking sound is my palm hitting my forehead...Fear! Of course! Now why didn't I...? Oh, hell, it doesn't matter...I'm just glad you figured it out and oh, what a glorious way to prove the point. I've always said one of the reasons he loves her is because she accepts him -- both of him -- completely and you couldn't have illustrated that better. OUTSTANDING! --Wendie

Author's Response: Tee hee, I'm sure I'm not the first one to envision her mutation that way, but it was a nice convenient excuse to have touchable smut, which is much easier to write than barrier smut. ;-) I'm so glad you liked her acceptance of him as well. The more I write about these two the more the lovely symmetry of them strikes me. Glad I was able to convey that.

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2011 3:29:30 AM Title: The Mark

Smokin'! Mikey likes it. Where by "Mikey" I mean "I." Such a lovely blend of sweet and sexy.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2011 12:47:51 AM Title: The Mark

If the previous chapter was smoking hot, then this one is off the charts nuclear!

I don't know how you do it, but this is the perfect blend of sexy and sweet. And I think for Logan and Marie, this is the epitome of a win-win situation. ;)

P.S. You owe me a new phone because after the last two chapters it is now a smoking pile of ash.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. And that the sweet came through along with the sexy, that's what I was going for. Sorry about the phone...stick in in the freezer and maybe it'll recover. ;-)

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2011 7:53:45 AM Title: The Mark

Glorious smut! I love thee!

Author's Response: :-D Yay! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: lily5 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2011 2:57:43 AM Title: The Mark

Review....
Awesome? Totally awesome? I so loved her acceptance of his feral side.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked the feral acceptance part. It came out a little weirder than I expected, but I liked it in the end. :-)

Reviewer: Katya Jade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2011 12:22:09 AM Title: The Mark

Gah! That was hot and sweet and tender and just pure poetry. The image of her realizing that she could control her power and then having Logan right there to 'experiment' on...just delicious.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, if anyone needs motivation to work on control, having semi-naked Logan right there seems like a pretty good incentive. ;-)

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 10:38:05 PM Title: The Mark

enjoyable as always. the chapter runs too beautifully, there's nothing extraneous. nicely done :-)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and didn't find it too wordy. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 10:31:51 PM Title: The Mark

Okay so maybe I shouldn't be the one to say I don't think this is too long since I can't seem to write a chapter under 5k, but I loved this.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. By the way, when is your next chapter coming up? ;-)

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 9:25:48 PM Title: The Mark

Such a great chapter. I loved it! Keep it up!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for your review.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 8:38:34 PM Title: The Mark

Whew! that was HOT. This story is SO good. That hotness is a huge bonus but I just love the story you are telling with this one. can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. I'll get working on more! :-D

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