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Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2011 8:53:16 PM Title: Chapter 13

Aw. Pout. Bitter, dark, cynical Logan is no fun. But you write him well. Him thinking it would be easier if she just died...*shudder*. Hope that was the booze talkin'.

"Hey, when I need to be a pain in the ass, I pull out all the stops." Ha! Damn straight. That's like, Jubilee's other mutant power or something :P. Great line.

Oh God. No. *scrubs eyes* I don't wanna think about his fuzzy blue posterior. I'm sorry Hank. You're frickin' awesome. But I don't wanna think about ya nekkid, big guy.

Awwwwww. Yay. That was a perfect way to resolve everything. You really brought out their bond to each other, and I loved the playful banter at the end. "Yeah, yeah. You and what army." Ha! Right. Hummm. I'm almost sad to see it end. Oh well, there's still the epilogue at least.

Author's Response: Thank you. :) I didn't want people to feel cheated at the end but I did want to wrap it up so it didn't go on forever. So glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2011 5:26:08 PM Title: Chapter 13

Am I allowed to be upset * slash * happy?

When I read your author's note my stomach sank. I knew the end was coming but still...

Bravo for a wonderful story, what a ride, and in such a short time! Your Rogue and Logan are perfect - their dialogue one of the best representations that I've read in fanfiction. I loved how Logan held her. Just. So. Sweet. And real. Very, very real.

Eagerly awaiting your epilogue! :)

Author's Response: Aw, I know. I'm kind of sad too, but either I just draw this one out again and again or I give them closure and work on something new! So, hopefully, the next thing I write will be as much fun! Thanks for all your support and reviews. :)

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2011 1:25:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

Bravo! Bravo! I loved it. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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