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[Report This]Date: 02/19/2014 9:29:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just stumbled across your wonderful story, it's a true pleasure to find a story on this site I haven't already read. I am enjoying it very much and just want to plead with you to finish this gripping storyline, I know there has to be more to the story...
[Report This]Date: 07/08/2011 3:24:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oooh, I like it. This is a great start. I love your dialogue; you've captured the characters' voices very, very well. The way you move the narration back and forth through time seems like a parallel to Rogue's mental state. ("Callous" by skybound2 used a similar technique, with equal success.) Will we get to see into the heads of the lab personnel much more?
Date: 07/07/2011 2:00:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is great! Well-written, and very interesting! You scared me with your author's notes, though, if I have to wait three years for it or if it stays unfinished I will be mad!!!
Date: 07/05/2011 6:44:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. Your writing style is smooth and very present-moment. I felt completely drawn in, to the point that it was even a bit difficult to read when Marie was getting prodded and jabbed! But the scene with Logan was very interesting. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Date: 07/05/2011 2:43:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
whoa! i hope they can save marie! great work so far, I hope you continue the story.
Date: 07/05/2011 1:27:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great great start! Thanks for making the switches between timelines so clear-- I sometimes have a hard time following those, but with this story it's not a problem. Please, update soon! I'm on the edge of my seat!
[Report This]Date: 07/05/2011 2:59:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, where did you come from?! This is FANTASTIC. Utterly, completely fantastic. I love how you interspersed the two time-lines, very clear, and you definitely got across the environment Marie finds herself in. (In the lab and while in the mansion after taking the original cure.) So many lines jumped out at me, but here are two that made me sit back and "feel".
Two of mutants—both of them with non-visible mutations-appeared to change their mind, and were allowed to leave the room, and presumably, the building.
That had me shivering. But I think this is my favourite:
...had jerked away from Bobby. "Don't touch me."
Irony.
I so enjoyed this and look forward to you continuing it. Oh, and thanks for the laugh, I SO hear you about the "ramblie" fics, LOL! Hey, you never know, you'll finish that first fic one day...but after this one, k?
:)