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Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 9:30:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

haha wow i love it. last bit= priceless.

Author's Response: Hehe... I liked that bit too :P. Glad to know someone else appreciates Logan's utter cockiness. (That wasn't supposed to sound dirty. Really.)

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 6:02:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

Your description of Rogue's post-wolf mental state is quite searing and vivid ... excellent job. I also enjoyed the contrast between Scott's disbelief and lack of comprehension, and Logan's instinctive knowledge of the feral and how to approach the situation. It certainly erases any doubts as to exactly who the alpha is :) Poor, lost Rogue - but things are looking up now. And yes, Scott - go find an elsewhere to be ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for the thoughtful review. I'm glad her state of mind came through well . . . I actually shied away from her POV 'cause I was scared it wouldn't come out like I wanted. And yes Scott, you buffoon, get the hell outta Roganland!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 11:37:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Holy wow, I have never been so irritated with Scott! Excuse me, you dork, can you just get out of there already so these two can have hot feral sex? Kthanxbai. ;-) Great chapter...please keep updating quickly, I'm on the edge of my seat here!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 6:39:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

Well now, this could be fun. More please!

Author's Response: Your wish, my command sweetums ;)

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 3:32:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

Whoa. That was hot. I love the display of dominance that Scott doesn't know how to recognize or interpret. He's too rational a man to really understand the feral mind.

You've obviously thought this through carefully. I like it!

Author's Response: Thanks, heh. I actually didn't think it through as carefully as I thought and ended up backpedaling on a couple of plot points, but oh well. Hopefully it's not noticeable to the reader lol

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 1:35:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

Ahhh, Logan

Author's Response: Ahhh, indeed, sister ;)

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2011 10:19:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow.

Talk about exciting and heart-stopping! I was complete lost in this! I am SO looking forward to your next chapter - great work! :)

Author's Response: Hee. You needn't look forward very far, seeing as I just posted it :). Glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2011 8:11:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

yippee! that was brutal.

Author's Response: Absolutely. I was going to skim over the details, but then thought 'Screw it. If I'm gonna attack this poor girl with a pack of wolves, by golly I'm gonna do it right.' Ya know?

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2011 9:49:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

You had me checking this site first thing in the morning to see if the next chapter was up yet, and I swear I did a little happy dance when it popped up.

This chapter was also great. Mystique is one stone-cold b*tch, huh? I like the idea of Marie absorbing the consciousness of animals, and what that might do to her. I have also been struck by the symmetry of how Marie-with-invulnerable-skin is immune to most medical interventions, leaving Logan's healing factor one of her few options. I can't wait to see how it plays out!

Author's Response: Ah, thanks so much. It may become apparent that Mystique isn't *quite* as heartless as she seems, but yeah. Stone-cold b*tch pretty much sums it up.

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2011 9:33:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really, really like this so far.

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2011 6:44:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good or bad? Definitely the former far far away from the latter and the fact that you’re posting another chapter so soon earns you loads of bonus points in my book!
Great stuff so far can’t wait for more (that’s actually so true it’s scary I’m so flippin impatient at chapter reading!)
Well done x

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm super impatient about that too, so I'll try not to keep you waiting long!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2011 8:30:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm doing the happy bounce at finding yet another AU to play with - it's so much fun to explore the Rogues and Logans that might have been. Very interesting to see Rogue already has a few traits often attributed to Logan, without having absorbed him yet, which promises to make the ride all kinds of fun. Looking forward to it!

Author's Response: Yeah. The idea that Rogue might develop a taste for good whiskey even without Logan's influence was just too fun. I had to use it :P. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2011 6:54:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good or bad? I vote for door number three, AWESOME! A great fic so far, fast-paced and well-written. So excited the next chapter is imminent!

Author's Response: Eep! Thanks very much. That means a lot, seeing as I'm reading through your stories right now and think they are pretty freakin' awesome as well :).

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2011 5:11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

ooohh cant wait for more. I like the comic version of rogue you're using.

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2011 5:11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

ooohh cant wait for more. I like the comic version of rogue you're using.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I like comic Rogue too. Well, and movie Rogue. She's pretty much an awesome character no matter what, heh ;P.

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2011 4:40:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am liking it a lot and do we really have to wait until tomorrow???

Author's Response: Ha sorry. If I could do nothing but sit and write, I would, trust me! Thanks for reading :).

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2011 3:51:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is very, very well written. Your characterizations are note-perfect and your writing is technically excellent: you show, don't tell, and create very vivid descriptions. Well done!

(This is editor-speak for "I loved it, moar plzkthx.")

Author's Response: Hee :). Awesome comment. Thanks so much. It takes more time, but I always prefer to show rather than 'this happened, then this happened, then...'. And I'm glad the characters came across well; this is my first X-men story. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2011 3:28:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow, this is really fantastic. The time and care you put into the woods and lake, plus Rogue's inner thinking was so good.

I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you :). This is my first time writing Rogue, so I'm glad her thoughts came across well.

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2011 3:01:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Im really interested to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Thanks :). I'm glad you enjoyed.

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