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[Report This]Date: 08/10/2011 10:21:05 AM Title: Sunlight
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Now this chapter made me all kinds of sad. Poor, poor Ororo. You brought in T'Challa (the first time I have ever read it in fanfic, Roganwise) and the comic-fan in me just about melted in contentment. What a phenomenal job. You still made him so very powerful, despite the outcome, so major kudos to you for that.
I especially like the connection Stray now has with Logan. What an extra-ordinary story you have going here, did I already tell you how addicted I am to it? :)
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2011 11:25:35 AM Title: Sunlight
‘Patience is a virtue’, yeah yeah ….I’m working on it…..bloody unsuccessfully I might add with these endings! And then you say you’re disappearing into RL? I really should be nice :) you’ve been great with updates and I’m really only pulling your leg but still….. RL? Do you really have too?!!!!
Great chapter, liked your explanation of moonlight key and sunlight lock, very in keeping with the whole magical, mythical feel. Still absolutely loving it, still want more, still gonna pester you ;)
Fav.:- ‘The sound of his heart a tattooed lullaby beating beneath his chest’
[Report This]Date: 08/06/2011 10:17:12 AM Title: The Man In The Wolf, The Wolf In The Girl
Another fantastic installment!
...the loss of his nearness tugging at her insides as if something precious were spilling out of her- Wow. Can't get a more emptier feeling than that.
"You think the stench of what you want from me is strong enough to protect you from what I am?” What a bastard thing to say and yet so thrillingly sexy. I could just HEAR Logan's voice there...
“There, there,” she murmured, “Poor beast, sweet beast. Don’t be angry my darling, don’t be sad, I’ll not leave you alone in the snow…”
So beautiful. How could he not fall in love with her? So magical. :)
[Report This]Date: 08/05/2011 4:39:08 PM Title: The Man In The Wolf, The Wolf In The Girl
Again this was a beautifully descriptive chapter. You really make it feel like we’re there, watching from the heart of the action. Jaq’s been trying to teach me patience, YOUR NOT HELPING!! I hate getting to the end, you just love teasing us [or torturing us as the case may be :)] onwards and upwards with the next chapter (I have nothing to bribe you with so I may have to resort to begging and you wouldn’t want to see a grown woman beg its not a pretty sight!
Date: 08/05/2011 1:32:46 PM Title: The Man In The Wolf, The Wolf In The Girl
Damn. I really really want to know about this Moonlight Key business.
I love this story and always enjoy seeing it on the most recent page. I am always in such a hurry to find out what happens that I tend to skip sentences on accident the first time through and have to reread the chapter to make sure I didn't miss anything. Not that that is a hardship mind you because you're writing it superb.
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2011 5:27:01 PM Title: Safe Places
My dear hobbit, keep writing like this and you will forever be in my good books! My dark side will stay reserved only for Jean :) I am soooooooooooooo loving this, there are the familiar aspects, the things we know, but it’s like we’re seeing the whole thing with a fresh set of eyes. Fantastic chapter, loved the title too, which had far more meaning with the plural (safes places and not place) 10/10 as usual x
Date: 07/30/2011 12:30:12 AM Title: Safe Places
Oh... my. That is kinda disturbingly hot. Or maybe I should be disturbed that I'm not more disturbed? Whichever, I'm really enjoying the story, though I'm a little uncertain exactly how wolflike you pictured him to be. Looking forward to the next installment!
Date: 07/29/2011 10:13:24 PM Title: Safe Places
Guilty as charged! I knew I was in trouble as soon as I saw that you had responded--that I had clearly crossed the line. I had deliberately omitted the song and artist name hoping that any possible negative connotations that you might have against it would not materialize and instead you would view it in the positive light that I had intended. I admit that there is a DEFINITE (huge, actually) cheese factor regarding him and his music, but, I promise you, your story is in NO WAY cheesy or anything else remotely like that. It was a positive reaction on my part, really.
If I did ruin your muse with this, then please send more than just Mistress Gold after me. I deserve it. Mea culpa. Geez, I'm really batting a 1,000 over here lately.
Uh, is it too late to say that I love this story and please forgive my foolish Meatloaf transgression?!!! Please, please, please (with soulful Bambi eyes)?!!! I solemnly swear to never invoke the name of Meatloaf or his evil lyrics ever again, as God is my witness!!!
Author's Response: oh, not the bambi eyes! anything but the bambi eyes! honey, i'm just joking: i spent a great deal of my teenage years head-banging to meatloaf. and AC/DC. and (whispers, terrified people will know) Bon Jovi... ahem, seriously, i'm always just grateful that people read and comment; i always love to hear from you so please don't think i'm mad. i'd have to be an ungrateful, humourless bint to get my knickers in a twist over something like that- especially since i laughed my arse off when i got the reference. don't worry, until the day logan in the comics shaves and hugh jackman spontaneously combusts from his own hotness i won't loose my muse on this one. so, please, forgive me :-)
Date: 07/29/2011 7:44:33 PM Title: Safe Places
Wow, that was really intense and, well, hot!
"The sight of those beautiful, lupine eyes staring up at her from between her breasts was the most wicked, gorgeous thing she’d ever seen."
Yeah, definitely hot. ;)
Can't wait to find out more about the cave and Stray being his moonlight key.
BTW, the lyrics to this old song popped into my head when I read this chapter:
[Boy:] On a hot summer night, would you offer your throat to the wolf with the red roses?
[Girl:] Will he offer me his mouth?
[Boy:] Yes.
[Girl:] Will he offer me his teeth?
[Boy:] Yes.
[Girl:] Will he offer me his jaws?
[Boy:] Yes.
[Girl:] Will he offer me his hunger?
[Boy:] Yes.
[Girl:] Again, will he offer me his hunger?
[Boy:] Yes!
[Girl:]And will he starve without me?
[Boy:] Yes!
[Girl:] And does he love me?
[Boy:] Yes.
[Girl:] Yes.
[Boy:] On a hot summer night, would you offer your throat to the wolf with the red roses?
[Girl:] Yes.
[Boy:] I bet you say that to all the boys!
Author's Response: woman, you do realise you've quoted meatloaf lyrics at me, don't you? I'LL never be able to take this story seriously again, let alone anyone else... wicked, wicked Oracle, i'm sending mistress gold after you ;-P
Date: 07/28/2011 6:48:53 PM Title: Safe Places
I love the imagery I get out of everything you write, but this story in particular is exceptionally beautiful. I see everything so vividly that it's almost like I'm watching a movie in my mind. Bravo.
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2011 11:48:19 AM Title: Safe Places
Another fantastic snippet of the world you've created, the snow, the wind, the landscape:
Branches a thick lattice overhead, roots snaking and treacherous underfoot.
And the connection between the two on a physical level is just ramping up:
The need to have it filled with a man’s moan or a wolf’s howl too intoxicating to resist.
Wow. Words to you are like shades of paint on an artist's tablet. I love your decription of Kurt and I think he would too - Errol Flynn incarnate!
Yet again, you amaze. :)
Date: 07/28/2011 8:03:24 AM Title: Safe Places
I read this once last night and again this morning. I don't know if you planned it or not but the cadence and language of this chapter fits its mood. It's smoky, dark and on the edge of scary but oddly comforting. I am highly intrigued as to what Ro is up to. She is obviously Logan's friend and a trusted one if she is in the cave. I am guessing that's Kurt but I can't help but wonder what Hank would be like.
Date: 07/25/2011 7:18:01 PM Title: Meeting the Wolf
I'm thoroughly enchanted by this! I loved their interaction -sweet and sexy. Nice touch with the phoenix feather at the end too. Can't wait for the next chapter. Seriously.
Date: 07/24/2011 7:29:26 AM Title: Meeting the Wolf
for now, I'm just gonna write "great" till I come with something better.
Will be looking forward to read a new chapter.
Date: 07/24/2011 7:17:22 AM Title: Prologue: Skin
Not what I'm used to read. Which is good.
I can see myself reading this fic and always waiting for an update.
Date: 07/21/2011 9:36:03 PM Title: Meeting the Wolf
I wanted to let you know how much I am loving the way you are growing the threat to them as well as the way you are bonding them together. I just hope the 'safe place' really is safe.
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2011 3:38:57 PM Title: Meeting the Wolf
Decking gold goes without saying, decking red is just something I seem always compelled to do! No-one and I mean no-one has been able to persuade me otherwise yet!! You may have split her completely but I have trouble seeing the two halfs as ‘different’ don’t worry its just me :) Red could say hello in the nicest possible way and I’d see the condescending bitch screaming underneath - it’s just how it is!!
Fantastic chapter full of wonderful descriptions, the visuals whilst reading were off the scale good especially the oak tree scene. However, will you refrain from stopping! Your too damn good at these endings leaving us all shouting ‘Nooooooooooo whats gonna happen, you can’t leave it there!’ I therefore vote that you forget RL for a while and just keep going until the end. (I think my impatience is improving don’t you think?) :)
Fav: “There’s not a body in the world can be blamed for being what they were born to be,”
Date: 07/21/2011 1:47:53 PM Title: Meeting the Wolf
Great update!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2011 10:55:07 AM Title: Meeting the Wolf
The terror of everyone - the bravery of Ororo (I wish she hadn't hurt him, though I understand she had no choice) and the woman scorned in your witchy Mistress Gold.
How much fun is this?!
“And blood?” The eyes moved nearer from the shadows. “You take no fright at the notion of being decked in that too?”
Scary and yet so freakin' sexy. Little girl, little girl, the time to flee is right now. But then again, maybe that warning applies to Logan, hmm? Love. This. I am such a sucker for fairy tales, especially dark interpretations of them. This is so wonderful, seriously.
Date: 07/21/2011 10:28:11 AM Title: Prologue: Skin
Beautifully written! The feather makes me think of The Phoenix which only further make me arch my brow in true Wolverine fashion. lol Looking forward to reading more.
Date: 07/20/2011 4:43:08 PM Title: The Moonlight Key
It's really interesting. Not honestly I would normally get into reading but you've crafted a very detailed world and I'm very intrigued as to where you're taking it.
Date: 07/19/2011 2:32:46 AM Title: The Moonlight Key
AMAZING! please, please, please update again soon, i'm dying to find out what happens next!!!
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2011 7:52:29 PM Title: The Moonlight Key
Ack! Noooes! I reached the end of this chapter so caught up that I failed to notice that the next chapter wasn't here! NOOOOEEESSSSS! I needs meh fix! Hurry up!!!
Date: 07/15/2011 2:25:41 PM Title: The Moonlight Key
Mysterious and interesting. I'm not entirely sure of what happened.I kind of like it that way too.
~Mia
Date: 07/14/2011 7:41:09 PM Title: The Moonlight Key
Geez, I don't know how I missed that! That is very clever and a very cool twist! I'll go back and reread that chapter again. Please forgive my thickheadedness and thanks for clearing that up for me!
Author's Response: thank you- once i thought of it i had to do it, lol! glad you like the idea...