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[Report This]Date: 06/17/2011 4:16:20 AM Title: Chapter 3: Prenatal Exercise
Oh I like. Please give us the next chapter as soon as possible!
Date: 06/17/2011 2:45:56 AM Title: Chapter 3: Prenatal Exercise
UPDATE NOW!!! easy break up-ish :)
Date: 06/16/2011 7:00:11 PM Title: Chapter 3: Prenatal Exercise
milf? LOL
Oh and I love possesive logan!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2011 12:08:44 PM Title: Chapter 3: Prenatal Exercise
I really, really, liked this - I love Remy's reaction to her confession, and to the pregnancy, and especially the honest reaction she had to his own confession.
As for the animosity between Logan and Remy....that just makes for some good tension! Great chapter! :)
Date: 06/16/2011 4:42:09 AM Title: Chapter 3: Prenatal Exercise
ohhh... logan a bit possessive? Love that. More please!
Date: 06/13/2011 3:41:44 AM Title: Chapter 2: Mood Swings
Im liking this so far. Only thing I didnt believe is Logan not noticing she was pregnant. If Hank did it Logan should had as well. Other than that I want to know where this is going. Whats gonna happen now that Rogue doesnt even know whos the father of the baby? Ohh this is getting good, please update soon
Date: 06/13/2011 2:18:48 AM Title: Chapter 2: Mood Swings
Well, butter my butt and call me a biscuit, she really doesn't know whose baby it is. But if I'm reading between the lines correctly--this time--I'm pretty sure whose kid she'd rather have...and it ain't the Cajun King of Casual Sex.
Oh, and no more apologizing for short chapters. That's the only kind I have time to read these days, and I would hate to get behind on this story. --Wendie
Date: 06/12/2011 10:28:40 PM Title: Chapter 2: Mood Swings
Nice. Poor Logan got blindsided. Keep it up I can't wait for more.
Date: 06/12/2011 9:35:32 PM Title: Chapter 2: Mood Swings
whoa might not be logans?!?! the plot thickens
Date: 06/12/2011 8:08:25 PM Title: Chapter 2: Mood Swings
I had to laugh at the pillow scene - could so see that happening. :)
Hmmm....cajun waking up early?..hmmm...
And I like this line, very Loganish:
It was concentrated, focused. He glanced towards me, his expression darkly concerned.
Keep the chapters coming, I really enjoying this!
Date: 06/12/2011 5:04:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: Mood Swings
Well that certainly didn't go well. LOL I am intrigued though. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 06/08/2011 11:50:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Instant Cravings
This is really, really good. I loved lots of lines in this, but this one sticked out to me, only because I am a little partial to him:
In the back of my mind I could hear the Remy in my head hissing dark and devious French swears
:) I can't wait for more...
Date: 06/08/2011 10:42:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Instant Cravings
Well done. You're writing is really fantastic and the characters seem real. I can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2011 9:20:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Instant Cravings
AHA! I see. Great way you show how Remy is a jerk in just one sentence. Or at least he seems so in my book so far. Also, OUCH! Logan apologizing for their night together has to hurt. Nothing more humiliating than an apology for intimacy.
Date: 06/08/2011 9:09:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Instant Cravings
Ahhh! Awesom spring fling, lol. Must read more! Your readers demand it! :)
Date: 06/08/2011 4:53:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Instant Cravings
Still trying to figure it out - so she is WITH Remy, who is a cheater, but she also cheated with Logan, and now isn't sure whose baby it is?
I'm in.
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2011 4:52:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Instant Cravings
Ought...like it! When will Logan find out?!
Date: 06/08/2011 3:19:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Instant Cravings
Well obviously Logan wanted her. and she wanted him. i can't wait to see where this goes.
Date: 06/08/2011 10:29:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: Instant Cravings
I wound my hands into the hair on the back of his head, knotting my fingers through his girls.
Something tells me you meant curls, right? If you haven't used that word before, be sure to check under the 'Help' tab for how to avoid the 'curl' error message.
Other than that, this still has my interest, although so far I don't think I like Rogue very much...She's bunking with Remy and sipping champagne in the rain with Logan? Somebody's got a lot of explaining to do... --Wendie
Author's Response: AHHHH!!! Fixed! I am so sorry!
[Report This]Date: 06/07/2011 8:33:20 PM Title: Prologue
Its been a while since Ive been hooked up with a story and now I am from chapter 1. I love your Logan, the way he talks, moves, his recklessness and the way he treates Marie. And totally loved Hank in there, so him.
I also enjoyed the nice peace of your writting, you describe everything so well with few words and make me imagine everything in my head like in a movie.
I hope you update soon this is very promising!
Date: 06/07/2011 3:18:11 PM Title: Prologue
Seriously? Am I the only one who read the following:
"But those brown eyes of his had too much power over me. I couldn’t resist if I tried. That’s what got me into this jam."
If that ain't Logan's baby, I'll eat my keyboard.
There are a lot more interesting questions to answer, however, such as:
How will she tell him? How will he react? Are they in love or just bed buddies? Was this a one-time unprotected event, or has this been going on for a while? Is she with Remy and cheating with Logan? IF so, how is an Alpha male like Logan tolerating that? How will the rest of the team take the news?
Oh, my, yes, you should continue...but let's not kid ourselves as to who the father of that baby is... --Wendie
[Report This]Date: 06/07/2011 10:12:57 AM Title: Prologue
You don't know if you should continue it!!????
Woman!! If you don't I will find you!!!
Date: 06/07/2011 9:31:01 AM Title: Prologue
Holy mackinaw, but this has me all kerfuffled. Intrigued is the least than I am feeling! Nice start. :)
Date: 06/07/2011 9:23:09 AM Title: Prologue
yes please continue. I want to know whose the father! oh jeez u cant leave me hanging like that. love
Date: 06/07/2011 8:07:36 AM Title: Prologue
None of your business, Hank! But... I wanna know, too. :)