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This is really, really good. I loved lots of lines in this, but this one sticked out to me, only because I am a little partial to him:
In the back of my mind I could hear the Remy in my head hissing dark and devious French swears
:) I can't wait for more...
Well done. You're writing is really fantastic and the characters seem real. I can't wait for more!
AHA! I see. Great way you show how Remy is a jerk in just one sentence. Or at least he seems so in my book so far. Also, OUCH! Logan apologizing for their night together has to hurt. Nothing more humiliating than an apology for intimacy.
Ahhh! Awesom spring fling, lol. Must read more! Your readers demand it! :)
Still trying to figure it out - so she is WITH Remy, who is a cheater, but she also cheated with Logan, and now isn't sure whose baby it is?
I'm in.
Ought...like it! When will Logan find out?!
Well obviously Logan wanted her. and she wanted him. i can't wait to see where this goes.
I wound my hands into the hair on the back of his head, knotting my fingers through his girls.
Something tells me you meant curls, right? If you haven't used that word before, be sure to check under the 'Help' tab for how to avoid the 'curl' error message.
Other than that, this still has my interest, although so far I don't think I like Rogue very much...She's bunking with Remy and sipping champagne in the rain with Logan? Somebody's got a lot of explaining to do... --Wendie
Author's Response: AHHHH!!! Fixed! I am so sorry!