The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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Very good insight into Bobby's POV, liked how he tried to tell what he's seen and how he feels about it. Again, awesome last line!
this is great, I like bobby, be's sweet and such a teenage boy and you captured that so well.
Of all the someone else's pov fic's on Logan and Rogue - this is one of the best. very well done x
Great one! Bobby is a real person here, perfect how him observing things and mulling them over tell the story - at last, he is more than a prop.
Just perhaps a little too wordy in his descriptions of the movie senes for my taste - but then, I am an impatient person.
Love your take on the end of the R/B relationship - I can easily imagine how he tries, very inexpertly and not without hurting both her and himself, to end it.
Wonderful how he is true and perecptive all the time, and how he gives the less than romantic end a twist towards the dark.
I truly enjoyed this one. Bobby seemed more mature more human than I could imagine him. Great job on this one!
I truly enjoyed this one. Bobby seemed more mature more human than I could imagine him. Great job on this one!